GT Task 1. You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work ...
Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2016 12:37 pm
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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
_______________
Dear Mr. Rashidov,
Hope you are doing well. I want to inform you that I need about a week time off work for a personal reason.
Probably, you remember that several months ago I told that FinTech conference would be hold in London in September. As you know I am very passionate about entrepreneurship in FinTech. Yesterday I got an invitation to participate in the conference as a guest speaker, and I will be delighted to use this opportunity.
The conference is scheduled for September 11th - September 16th, but I want to travel to London couple of days in advance to prepare for the event. I have booked my flight already and plan to leave on September 9th. The return flight will be on September 17th.
I want to ensure you that all deadlines of our new project will be met because my duities could be fulfilled by Asad. I have discussed with him my travel plans to confirm that he will be in the office during my absence and will handle the project. I hope you do not mind my taking time off work for the mentioned dates. Please let me know your thoughts on this matter.
Sincerely,
Vadim.
You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
_______________
Dear Mr. Rashidov,
Hope you are doing well. I want to inform you that I need about a week time off work for a personal reason.
Probably, you remember that several months ago I told that FinTech conference would be hold in London in September. As you know I am very passionate about entrepreneurship in FinTech. Yesterday I got an invitation to participate in the conference as a guest speaker, and I will be delighted to use this opportunity.
The conference is scheduled for September 11th - September 16th, but I want to travel to London couple of days in advance to prepare for the event. I have booked my flight already and plan to leave on September 9th. The return flight will be on September 17th.
I want to ensure you that all deadlines of our new project will be met because my duities could be fulfilled by Asad. I have discussed with him my travel plans to confirm that he will be in the office during my absence and will handle the project. I hope you do not mind my taking time off work for the mentioned dates. Please let me know your thoughts on this matter.
Sincerely,
Vadim.