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You work in a busy but poorly organised office and you are keen to be promoted. Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your department. Write a letter to your employer. In the letter ask to be considered for this job explain why you would be a suitable candidate outline the current problem...

A pupil in general isnt a gud idea i think.
asserting that u aint in favour is again not a gud udea

I jus wana know if its better than previous writings plz .. i knw correcting it would be hectic

you are part of a group of musicians who meet on Monday and Wednesday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to manager, Describe what the group does Describe why the group is good for commu...

You are going on a month training program to UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organizer. Write a letter to the training organizer 1. Expressing your interest in the role 2. Requesting more information about it 3. Explaining what expe...

Hey thanks for sharing task 2. You can usually pick up topics from recent questions of this blog.

Well.. I am mostly given band 7 for my writing. And your writing is definitely better than mine so ithas to be somewhere between 7.5-8. Also, 2nd para long sentences shouldbe looked at and need revision.

Wow this is helpful.Thanks alot

Thanks a lot. I guess i am not good in forming grammatical structures

this is my first time rating anyone but i am just pointing out mistakes. Bold portion of your essay needs to be looked at again. "It is common today, parents nowadays have less time with their children compare to the past 30 years. This can be seen to the changes of lifestyles, daily needs and ...

Thanks . Let me note it down.

Hey Thanks.

I am noting the suggestions/improvements and will share other writings soon.

Hey Having your suggestions are always overwhelming. Thank alot. I keep reading for changes and try to bring similar style in my convos too. But i am afraid , for e.g. this starter "I, Fatima Hasan"... this has been used so many times that I have learned to write in any "FORMAL LETTER...

Hey Thanks alot for the feedback. I am trying to improve

can someone please evaluate it? is it worth 8 bands?

hey thanks flick

Q. You are to start a new to next week but you will not be able to because you have some problem. Write a letter to your new employer . In your letter, 1. explain your situation 2. Describe your position. 3. Tell him/her when you think you can start. Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Fatima Hasan and I am ...

can some one please rate it. I just need the band i can get?

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: • introduce yourself • explain what experience and special skills you have • explain wh...

Thank you so much.. It was of much help. )

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take ******************************************************************** Dear Su...