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People nowadays are not fit and active than the people from the old days. Discuss the causes and suggest some solutions. Since the beginning of the recorded time, there has been a tremendous change in our lifestyles. This transition has been observed due to inexorable technological practices that pe...

faty I am reviewing since no one has, but there are better people to review this 1. The first para is missing an outline sentence. ( this essay will be ....) 2. Para 2 It is perceived that employees are most likely to take interest in their jobs ( they will "show" interest ) if they own a...

Hi there, The general structure of the essay is there. There are still opportunities for you to improve the essay. A few areas for you to consider are: - Choice of words. In some cases, there are more appropriate word choices. For example, you used 'enormous fields', i would suggest 'a number of fi...

Hi, faty! Good job! The main ideas for supportive paragraphs are a little bit blurred, but I do realize how difficult it is to think up a striking example... I wrote such the essay too, if you wish you can find it several posts back. Overall, it is a well-structured essay, just check the choice of ...

Student are learning a variety of subjects in schools. Some people think there is no need for that. Do you agree or disagree? Advancement in research has introduced enormous fields that can be opted for study. This is nowhere more evident than the increased number of options available to students to...

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Can some one please evaluate.

Some people think that employers must make decisions, some argue that managers should lead companies. Discuss both point of view and tell your opinion. _______________________________________________________________________________________ Successful organizations have proven to survive in the marke...

this is just a little alteration to the actual post. I have changed the question a bit.

Some people think an employee must make decisions, some argue that a manager ought to lead companies. Discuss both and tell your opinion. _______________________________________________________________________________________ With the proliferation of high-tech environment, companies have altered th...

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I wonder if flick can point out grammatical errors.

I believe speaking until you are interrupted by examiner will not loose you marks.

Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree/disagree. Give reasons and include relevant examples. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...

I guess your response is much better than mine. thanks for the idea.

just that the "mindful" in your second paragraph is little perturbing. I am not sure if it is adequate to use?

Your overall response is quite assembled too.

You are due to start a new job but you will not be able to because you have some problem. Write a letter to your new employer: 1.Explain your situation 2. Describe your problem 3. Tell him/her when you think you can start ------------------------------------------------------------------------------...

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During recent years number of countries that sell their products to other counties is increasing. Do you think this development is positive or negative? _______________________________________________________________________________________ Apropos of the statement, I am in consummate accord with th...

You have joined a sport club and you are in unsatisfied. Write a formal letter and make recommendations. - Introduce yourself - problem - recommendations _______________________________________________________________________________ Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to introduce myself as a new member o...

you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this ma...

This was huge. Thanks alot. Just noting down.

Thank you so much. I understand that its the grammar and choice of words mostly. Thanks a lot

I am continuously feeling that I need to work on my grammar. But i am unsure how to do that. Thanks for constantly judging. I am using templates to write letters now.

You traveled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it. _______________________________________...

You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain the situation - say what action you would like to company to take. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatis...

Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time. Apply in writing to: You see the above advertisement for a course designed to help improve your memory. Write a lette...