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by JamalOZ
Wed Feb 17, 2016 10:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Task1 [Your friend has offered to sell you something] Thanks for your help
Replies: 1
Views: 1573

IELTS Task1 [Your friend has offered to sell you something] Thanks for your help

Your friend has offered to sell you something. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter include: -what the item is -questions requesting details of the item being sold -what price you think is fair Dear John, I hope you’re doing fine and thank you for your offer. Your offer comes at a perfect t...
by JamalOZ
Wed Feb 17, 2016 9:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay 2 **Should education and healthcare be free** Please help
Replies: 3
Views: 938

Re: Essay 2 **Should education and healthcare be free** Please help

Thanks David for your feedback, It is much appreciated.
by JamalOZ
Wed Feb 17, 2016 5:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay 2 **Should education and healthcare be free** Please help
Replies: 3
Views: 938

Essay 2 **Should education and healthcare be free** Please help

Question ======== Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services? Essay ===== Schools and hospitals are paid services is most of the countries in the world. Some people think that those servic...
by JamalOZ
Sat Feb 13, 2016 1:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay#2 **there is a need to protect the environment** Grammar Help
Replies: 2
Views: 691

Essay#2 **there is a need to protect the environment** Grammar Help

Question ======== Many people say there is a need to protect the environment, however little effort has been made to fruition. How do you feel about this situation? What action could be taken to prevent further environmental damage? Discuss this issue by giving real life examples. Essay ====== Envir...
by JamalOZ
Fri Feb 12, 2016 12:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT Letter Task#1 **You have decided to leave your current job ** Please help with Grammar
Replies: 0
Views: 2964

GT Letter Task#1 **You have decided to leave your current job ** Please help with Grammar

You have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it. Write a letter to inform your manager of your decision. In your letter - Tell the manager about your decision and the reason for it - Describe what you learnt in your current job - And ask the manager to write a reference letter to...
by JamalOZ
Fri Feb 12, 2016 12:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT Letter Task#1 **you are looking for rented accommodation** Please help with Grammar
Replies: 2
Views: 2710

GT Letter Task#1 **you are looking for rented accommodation** Please help with Grammar

You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter - Introduce yourself and your family - Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find - Give your preference for the location of the acc...
by JamalOZ
Fri Feb 12, 2016 12:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay#2 **high salary is the most important criterion when choosing a new job** Grammar Help
Replies: 2
Views: 861

Essay#2 **high salary is the most important criterion when choosing a new job** Grammar Help

Question ======== For some people a high salary is the most important criterion when choosing a new job. Do you agree or disagree? Essay ===== Money has a large influence on human beings decisions. For this reason, some people believe that a main reason for choosing a job is the salary. Even if the ...
by JamalOZ
Thu Feb 11, 2016 10:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Task1 [Write a letter to apologise for missing the birthday celebration] Thanks for your help
Replies: 2
Views: 15142

Re: IELTS Task1 [Write a letter to apologise for missing the birthday celebration] Thanks for your help

Hello!
Thanks for your feedback. Could you please point out my grammar mistakes in order to reach band 7? it seems that it's my main weakness.
Many thanks.
Jamal
by JamalOZ
Thu Feb 11, 2016 10:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Task1 [Write a letter to the restaurant manager] Thanks for your help
Replies: 2
Views: 3813

Re: IELTS Task1 [Write a letter to the restaurant manager] Thanks for your help

Hello!
Thanks for your feedback. Could you please point out my grammar mistakes? it seems that it's my main weakness.
Many thanks.
Jamal
by JamalOZ
Thu Feb 11, 2016 10:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay 2 **criminal record should be removed** Please help
Replies: 2
Views: 1871

Re: Essay 2 **criminal record should be removed** Please help

Hi David,
Thanks for your feedback. I'm stuck at 6.5 and can't reach 7. It seems that the grammar is my main weakness.
Could you please kindly point out some of the grammar mistakes?
Many thanks for your help.
Jamal
by JamalOZ
Thu Feb 11, 2016 10:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task#2
Replies: 2
Views: 549

Re: Writing Task#2

Hi David,
Thanks a lot for your feedback, much appreciated.
Cheers,
Jamal
by JamalOZ
Wed Feb 10, 2016 11:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Task1 [Write a letter to apologise for missing the birthday celebration] Thanks for your help
Replies: 2
Views: 15142

IELTS Task1 [Write a letter to apologise for missing the birthday celebration] Thanks for your help

One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: - Apologise for missing the birthday celebration - Explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend - A...
by JamalOZ
Wed Feb 10, 2016 11:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Task1 [Write a letter to the restaurant manager] Thanks for your help
Replies: 2
Views: 3813

IELTS Task1 [Write a letter to the restaurant manager] Thanks for your help

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter - Give details of your visit to the restaurant - Explain the reason for the celebration - Say what was good a...
by JamalOZ
Tue Feb 09, 2016 11:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay 2 **criminal record should be removed** Please help
Replies: 2
Views: 1871

Essay 2 **criminal record should be removed** Please help

Some people believe that a person’s criminal record should be removed when they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Criminal records deletion has been a subject of studies for several years and especially when those records concern teenagers. Some people believe that young ...
by JamalOZ
Tue Feb 09, 2016 5:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task#2
Replies: 2
Views: 549

Writing Task#2

Hello all, Could someone kindly review my essay and provide feedback and areas of improvement? What band should I expect with this quality of writing? Many thanks. :) Question: ====== Some argue younger people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while others think this is a g...