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by Prams
Mon Apr 13, 2015 7:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Struggling to write detailed background statement
Replies: 7
Views: 1633

Re: Struggling to write detailed background statement

Scope: Government investment, art, public services I would have started my essay as.. Art is gaining a high popularity in today’s world. This statement can easily be claimed just by looking at the amount of money spent every year by the government on the art. Background sentence: Art is gaining a h...
by Prams
Mon Apr 13, 2015 2:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing.
Replies: 3
Views: 743

Re: Please evaluate my writing.

If possible also give the essay an approx band score. I am still beginner for IELTS, I need at least band 7-7.5 Any suggestion to improll be highly appreciated! As far as I'm concerned, this essay would score at least 7 possibly even 8. But I'm no Ielts marker, neither am I a guru by any stretch of...
by Prams
Sun Apr 12, 2015 6:38 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing.
Replies: 3
Views: 743

Re: Please evaluate my writing.

If possible also give the essay an approx band score. I am still a beginner for IELTS, I need at least band 7-7.5
Any suggestion to improve will be highly appreciated!
by Prams
Sun Apr 12, 2015 6:29 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing.
Replies: 3
Views: 743

Please evaluate my writing.

Topic: Public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. Do you agree or disagree? Essay: In this modern era, technology is playing a very vital role in every aspects of our life. This is quite appa...