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ishakampani
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Because of the busy pace of modern life,many children spend most of their time indoor and have little exposure to the natural world
how important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience

there is no doubt that nature is most precious gift of God to man,it provides us oxygen to live,trees to provide shelter and timber but the pace of life is getting faster day by day and people are becoming busy and avoiding nature.

i m strongly agree with this point that children are spending their most time indoor because of new technologies, children are always keen to play games on computer and avoid to visit gardens and stadiums to play sports game.moreover,some sports games are also available online to play such as cricket,hockey,badminton and many more so children spend their more time to play such games on computer instead of in stadiums.Apart from this,children spend their time in watching cartoon on television and and imagine their life in that way and making a cartoon world for them.furthermore,children do no have time even for morning walk because of such activities and spending their all tie in front of t.v and computer.

it is crucial to understand the value of nature for children so that they do not harm and misuse the nature,it is difficult to count the blessings of nature and we can not even dream of life without these blessings and they should respect the nature as well.

in conclusion,children should push themselves in natural things and games they should reduce the time of watching television and they should also participate in sports so that they can be in contact with nature.
durai
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Re: please bands for it

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Hi Ishakampani,


Make corrections with your capital letters ( start of every sentence) and then submit your essay. Because with these basic errors your essay doesn't score well.

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