please evaluate my writing task 2
Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2017 5:22 pm
task 2 question :
"by punishing murderers with the death penalty,society is also guilty of committing a murder. Therefore,life in prison is a better punishment for murderers, "
my response:
Law is what differentiates human beings from other animals. execution is one of the measures used by some countries rather than others. Is this punishment better than imprisonment ? is it a downfall for a country to implement such a penalty ? I strongly believe that doing so is better in many aspects than life in prison. I also think the society would be doomed if it overlooked such a wise judgment .
Imagining a world with no capital punishment is very scary. to begin with , a barbarian life is exactly the description of the streets outside. Mass murders for individuals seeking vengeance , would be committed. A lot of dead children , women and weak men . although the society thinks it would be a trouble if it committed another murder , in a matter of fact it is going to be a terrible bloody life , Moreover, homeless people would gladly prefer a life in prison where shelter and food are attainable.
On the contrary , a better safe society would be secured , knowing that a strong punishment as death is what a waits criminals. The law would be playing a major part by protecting the weak. Despite that a family for instance , which lost a beloved one would be less reckless, knowing that the killer will face justice.
To conclude with , it is better to have that sort of punishment for such a crime. The society would be committing another murder by leaving the misfit a life in prison. Our life will be full of hate and loss the meaning of love , compassion and never the least safety.
"by punishing murderers with the death penalty,society is also guilty of committing a murder. Therefore,life in prison is a better punishment for murderers, "
my response:
Law is what differentiates human beings from other animals. execution is one of the measures used by some countries rather than others. Is this punishment better than imprisonment ? is it a downfall for a country to implement such a penalty ? I strongly believe that doing so is better in many aspects than life in prison. I also think the society would be doomed if it overlooked such a wise judgment .
Imagining a world with no capital punishment is very scary. to begin with , a barbarian life is exactly the description of the streets outside. Mass murders for individuals seeking vengeance , would be committed. A lot of dead children , women and weak men . although the society thinks it would be a trouble if it committed another murder , in a matter of fact it is going to be a terrible bloody life , Moreover, homeless people would gladly prefer a life in prison where shelter and food are attainable.
On the contrary , a better safe society would be secured , knowing that a strong punishment as death is what a waits criminals. The law would be playing a major part by protecting the weak. Despite that a family for instance , which lost a beloved one would be less reckless, knowing that the killer will face justice.
To conclude with , it is better to have that sort of punishment for such a crime. The society would be committing another murder by leaving the misfit a life in prison. Our life will be full of hate and loss the meaning of love , compassion and never the least safety.