Kindly assess my task 1

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musaab_taha
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Kindly assess my task 1

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The graph shows an island before and after some constructions work for tourist resources.It can be clearly seen that there is a considerable change between before and after.A lot of buildings has been built

The island in general us not big, what made liberty of change is so limited.The main entrance to the island is through the pier using boats, which os located in the southern part of the island.The first building you face is the reception which is located to the north of the pier it can be reached by vehicle track from the pier.The restaurant is located in the north of the reception it can be reached by the vehicle track from the reception.In the east of the reception there is tourists accommodation which is not connected to footpath or vehicle track.In the west of the reception another tourist accommodation is connected through footpath only , in the far west there is beach , it can be reached using footpath people can swim there.In the far east there some scattered dates trees but this part doesn't contain any considerable tourist facility.

In conclusion, the reception is located in the center of the island and the island has undergone a massive change.
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musaab_taha wrote: Tue Sep 19, 2017 6:19 pm The map shows an island before and after some construction work for tourist resources. It can be clearly seen that there is a considerable change between the before and after. Several buildings have been built

The island in general is not big, so construction was limited. The main entrance to the island is via the pier, which is located in the southern part of the island. The first building you reach from the pier is the reception, which is located just north of the pier and can be reached by vehicle. The restaurant is located to the north of the reception and can also be reached by vehicle. To the east and west of the reception is accommodation which is only accessible by foot. At the far west end of the island isa beachwhich can be reached via a footpath. To the far east there are some scattered dates trees but no tourist facilities.

In conclusion, the reception is located in the center of the island and the island has undergone a massive change.
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