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Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?

Today the method of shopping has changed so dramatically. This can be seen on the growing of online shopping. Although this kind of shopping has many effects in terms of environment and jobs. These effects will be analyzed on this essay.

Online shopping can help to improve the environment. For example, when ordering things online it will be delivered to person house. As this example shows, on carbon dioxide will be emitted on air because the buyer will not have to drive to buy that thing or use public transportation, furthermore, this trend will help to decrease traffic congestion as less car will be running on the street. Thus, the advantages of online shopping is obvious.

However online shopping has negative impact on market place. For instance, many traditional market or shops will be shutdown as a result a lot of people will lose their jobs. As this shows most companies will tend to save money by cutting down huge numbers of salesman and replace them with a single IT professional to run the business by posting and promoting product on internet. This trend will surly have a negative ramification on people life’s.

Inconclusion online shopping has become part of people modern life, people needs to life with it and accept its positive and negative effects that is cause to life. On the near future it is expected that this kind of shopping will dominate all kind of market, and all the physical or traditional market will die out for sure.
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