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saravanan ps
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CUE CARD:

Describe your childhood room,

you should say:
What it looked like
What was in it
What you did in the room
and explain what you liked about the room
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saravanan ps
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Post by saravanan ps »

kindly rate pls. Need to find my band .
durai
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Post by durai »

hi,

its about your chidhood room, should use past tense...but you have used some present tense

3 minutes is too long, make sure you answer all 4 questions before end of 2 minutes, if examiner stop you and you haven't started the answered any question then lose marks for coherence.

the above one looks band 6 to 6.5

pronunciation was fine, but some pauses, and your organisation of the talk is bit incoherent, vocabulary not reached band 7..
JAN 2014 L 8.5 R 8 W 6.5 S 6.5
FEB 2014 L 8 R 8 W 7 S 6.5
APR 2014 L 8 R 9 W 6.5 S 7
JUN 2014 L 8.5 R 7 W 6.5 S 6
July 2014 L 8.5 R 7 W 6.5 S 6.5
OCT 2014 L 7.5 R 7 W 7 S 7
saravanan ps
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Post by saravanan ps »

Hi Durai,

Thanks for your continous feedback mate.

I will work on the area as u suggested.
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