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Raina
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can some one please evaluate and give the suggestion thank

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Celebrities are usually famous for glamor and wealth rather than their achievements. Some say taking as an example can dangerous or young people .To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt, cultural values has been effecting directly due to greater influence by the celebrities life style, would be threaten for the society. Thus due to advancement of technology all the unauthorized material are available on net effecting our younger generation ,lead to negative impact on their minds. Moreover celebrities like, film star, models and TV actors and actress again popularity in short time Span whereas their contribution to the society.

First of all, young children are more attractive towards the glamor world and try to imitate their trend , and life style but they are not aware of the consequence.for example these days young girls copies the fashion tends which models showered on Cat Walk, as a result such dresses are not been acceptable by the society , as a result they become victim of Sexual harassment . On the other hand young boys attracted towards celebrities branded cars, house and their rich and famous lifestyle they start looking for short cuts in life to get rich over night they perhaps indulged in to wrong activities like drug and alcohol addict .

Now, it is a parent responsibility to guide their children that all glitter is not gold , keep them on right track away from the evil of the society and made them a useful member of the society.

In conclusion, now a days celebrities has great influence on a youth therefore parents should keep control on the child daily activities.
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Re: can some one please evaluate and give the suggestion tha

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Raina wrote:Celebrities are usually famous for glamor and wealth rather than their achievements. Some say taking as an example can dangerous or young people .To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt cultural values have been effected directly due to greater influence by the celebrity life style, which, I believe, threatens society. Due to the advancement of technology, plenty of unauthorized material is available on net, effecting our younger generation and leading to a negative impact on their minds. Moreover celebrities like film stars, models, and TV actors and actresses gain popularity in a short time span compared to their contribution to society.

First of all, young children are more attracted by the glamor of celebrities, and try to imitate their trends and lifestyles, but they are not aware of the consequences. For example, these days young girls copy the sometimes inappropriate fashion tends which models show on the Cat Walk. As a result, they become victims of sexual harassment . On the other hand young boys are attracted to celebrity endorsed cars, houses and their rich and famous lifestyles, so they start looking for short cuts in life to get rich over night, which could lead to activities like drug and alcohol addiction.

Now, it is a parent's responsibility to teach their children that all that glitters is not gold, keep them on right track away from the evil of society and make them a useful member of society.

In conclusion, nowadays celebrities have great influence on youth therefore parents should keep control on their child's daily activities.
Don't forget to make your opinion clear. You discuss the dangers of the celebrity lifestyle influencing children, but don't say to what extent you agree or disagree.
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