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Does modern technology make life more convenient, or was life better when technology simpler?
One of the world’s greatest inventions is the computer. Since then, there have been even more dramatic improvements. It is argued that modern technology has made life more convenient and this is definitely supported. This will be proven by showing how advanced technology saves time and money in everyday life.
In this fast- paced era, time is of great value and with advanced technology time can be used more efficiently. For instance, gone are the days of standing in long lines at the bank to do transactions which often consumed a large part of the day. The use of personal computers or even mobile phones to do online banking such as bill payment and fund transfers can be carried out in just a few minutes from anywhere, twenty four hours a day thus, eliminating the hassle of trying to meet business hours or wasting time that could be used for more productive activities. Therefore this proves how advanced technology saves time and is also convenient.
Another benefit to be derived from modern technology is that it saves money in everyday life. For example, the use of communication Medias such as Face book, Skype, What’s App and so on keep people in touch for free. Depending on where in the world a telephone call is being made to it incurs a different cost and these call charges can be very expensive and at the same time not enough talk time is provided. The use of the above mentioned communication sites provide unlimited interaction at no cost. Thus it can be seen how technology conveniently saves money.
In conclusion, it is obvious that modern technology saves time and money and therefore makes life easier. After analyzing these points in the years to come it can be clearly seen that technology will continue to provide efficient and effective benefits to life in general.
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Re: Another essay attempt.
Rosh wrote: Does modern technology make life more convenient, or was life better when technology simpler?
One of the world’s greatest inventions was the computer. Since then, there have been even more dramatic advancements. It is argued that modern technology has made life more convenient and this is definitely supported with documented evidence. This will be proven by showing how advanced technology saves time and money in everyday life.
In this fast-paced era, time is of great value, and, with advanced technology, time can be used more efficiently. For instance, gone are the days of standing in long lines at the bank to do transactions which often consumed a large part of the day. The use of personal computers or even mobile phones to do online banking, including bill payment and fund transfers, can be carried out in just a few minutes from anywhere, 24 hours a day, thus eliminating the hassle of trying to meet business hours or wasting time that could be used for more productive activities. This is just one example of how advanced technology saves time and is convenient.
Another benefit to be derived from modern technology is that it saves money in everyday life. For example, the use of communication medias such as Facebook, Skype, What’s App and so on keep people in touch for free. Depending on where in the world a telephone call is being made from and to, it incurs a cost and these call charges can be very expensive while at the same time not providing enough time for the call to be productive. The use of the medias mentioned above provide unlimited interaction at no cost. Thus, it is clear that modern technology is convenient and saves money.
In conclusion, it is obvious that modern technology saves time and money and therefore makes life easier. After analyzing these points, I believe, in the years to come, we will see that technology will continue to provide efficient and effective benefits to life in general.
Re: Another essay attempt.
Thanks Flick for evaluating my essay. The corrections you made to my sentence structure have definitely made my points clearer and allow the sentences to flow better. Thanks again.