Task II Please,grade all of these

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Muxtar
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Task II Please,grade all of these

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

People have different views about whether it is a good thing to follow same routines or it is much better to do changes through our lives. Although there are convincing points in favor of avoiding changes, I personally believe that adding new changes to life is more beneficial.

Opponents of this idea claim that doing same things are associated with some reasons. One of them is that specializing in any area. For example, Accountants are able to do his work with an enthusiasm and it would be disruptive effect for him to change his career prospects after certain age because they have already learnt all secrets of accounting process and able to manage them easily. Another example is that many illiterate people prefer avoiding from new changes due to probability of giving up their workplace. They do not know how to use modern technologies and apply them to workplace appropriately

Supporters of this argument think that job market is becoming increasingly demand for people who are talented, hardworking, having working ability with latest technologies and open new challenges in their workplace as the invention of technologies in today modernized era. As long as workers follow same things, it could cause a feeling of bored. If economist is a serious in his work and have a special skills, it will be undoubtedly possible for him to being promoted to higher position and also managers tend to encourage higher skilled workers by giving incentives them that is best example of making a profit by adding changes to life.

To sum up, it seems to me that changing in any point of life is more better rather than continuing in doing same things.
JMC
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Re: Task II Please,grade all of these

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

People have different views about whether it is a good thing to follow same routines or whether it is much better to make changes throughout our lives. Although there are convincing points in favor of avoiding changes, I personally believe that adding new changes to life is more beneficial.

Opponents of this idea claim that doing same things are associated with some good reasons. One of them is directed at those who specialize in a certain area. For example, accountants are able to perform their work with enthusiasm over a long period of time,[/color]. It would be disruptive for them to change their career prospects after a certain age because they have already learned the accounting process and are able to manage them easily. Another example is that many illiterate people prefer avoiding new changes due to probability of giving up their workplace. These types of workers do not know how to use modern technologies and apply them to workplace appropriately

Supporters of this argument think that the job market is becoming [delete] increasingly demanding for people who are talented and hardworking, have experience with latest technologies, and can handle new challenges in their workplace as the invention of technologies [delete] in today's market. If workers follow the same routine, it could cause a feeling of bored [delete] boredom. If an economist is a serious in his work and has special skills, it will be undoubtedly possible for him to be promoted to a higher position. Also, managers tend to encourage higher skilled workers by giving incentives to them that is best example of making a profit by adding changes to life. This last sentence make no sense. Please clarify.

To sum it up, it seems to me that change during any point in life is more [delete] better rather [delete] than continuing in [delete] doing same things.
Muxtar
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Re: Task II Please,grade all of these

Post by Muxtar »

hi JMC
what score you would give this?
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