difference b/w Educate and Literate person

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niggi naz
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difference b/w Educate and Literate person

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Q: How people define the real difference between Educate and Literate person. State your opinion about our education structure relevant to their Discussion?
Educated and Literate, both terms are used for same kind of people who have the knowledge to read and write. But difference lies in the fact that literate is a person who applies his knowledge in his practical life. His attitude,behavior and personality has a great impact of his learning as compared to educated person.
A literate person is the civilized and well mannered mannered member of his society. He feels his responsibility to depict knowledge in his personal attitude and he becomes the role model for other persons. he gives respect to others and in return rewarded by the dignity. But an ill mannered person with higher education can't get the same state among people. Though he is highly qualified and may be entertaining a valuable position in his job. But his behavior makes people to hate him. Nobody likes to communicate with him.
So, it's better to behave like a literate man rather than to be highly educated but of no use. Both persons enjoy same life and possess same duties then why a person should abuse himself by his violent and arrogant behavior. Human beings are supposed to be Crown creature over others. So, there should be some differences between the behavior of animals and human beings. If we think upon this point that even an animal get trained when he learns. Then why humans can't implement their education and learning in lives. Man is the highly selected and complicated organism of evolutionary chain.
he is highly organised and most intelligent of all that he even got control over the whole universe . Still he is revealing the secrets of nature. So, its quite easy and simple for a man to be educated and after that to be civilized and well mannered. Man boast up with beauty and superior position. So, he can make himself up with moral values. and it would also help him to spread peace and love throughout the world.
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Re: difference b/w Educate and Literate person

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niggi naz wrote:Q: How people define the real difference between Educate and Literate person. State your opinion about our education structure relevant to their Discussion?

Educated and Literate. Both terms are used for people who have the ability to read and write. But the difference lies in the fact that someone who is literate is a person who applies his knowledge in his practical life. His attitude, behavior and personality has a greater impact on his learning than an educated person.
A literate person is the civilized and well mannered (<-- mannered was typed twice.)member of his society. He feels it is his responsibility to represent knowledge in his personal attitude and he becomes the role model for other people. He gives respect to others and is given respect in return. But an ill mannered person with higher education is unable to gain a similar status among people. Though he is highly qualified and may have a successful career, his behavior makes people dislike him. (<-- hate is a very strong word. Dislike is more appropriate.) Nobody likes to communicate with him.
So, it's better to behave like a literate man rather than to be highly educated but of no use. Both types of person have the same opportunities to enjoy life and make successful careers, so why should an educated man create unnecessary roadblocks to success by his violent and arrogant behavior. Human beings are supposed to be more intelligent than other creatures. (<-- 'Crown creature' sounds very arrogant, which is not beneficial, as you write about in the previous sentence.) So, there should be some differences between the behavior of animals and human beings. However, if we consider that even an animal can learn, then there should be no reason why humans can't implement their education and learning in their daily lives. Man is the most complicated organism of the evolutionary chain. He is highly organised and intelligent, (of all that he even got control over the whole universe . Again, this sounds very arrogant and is unappealing to the reader.) but he is still learning the secrets of nature. So, it is quite easy for a man to be educated and after that to be civilized and well mannered. (Man boast up with beauty and superior position. This sentence does not add value to the essay.) It is harder, but just as important to have moral values which can help to spread peace and love throughout the world.
Hi niggi naz

This is a good start. You clearly explained the difference between educated and literate people. Then it got a bit confusing. It might be better to have an introduction where you explain the difference between educated and literate people. Then a paragraph talking about the good and bad points of educated people. A paragraph talking about literate people and a paragraph comparing the two.
Good luck!

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Re: difference b/w Educate and Literate person

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Thanks for giving me your time Flick....... I have noticed my mistakes. Your suggestions are helping me a lot for my improvement. Thanks for your favor and response. May God bless you!
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