Task 1 please rate this

[Sadii]

The bar graph represents different films that screened im Britain and Australia in the year 2001,whilst the line graph demonstrates admissioms in movie in Britain and Australia in between 1975 and 2005. In addition to that the US films were played nearly 4 times more than any other films and the people of UK watched more cinemas than people of Australia.
To begin with , over three-quarters oh US films were seen in the UK and in Australia the US films that screened were slightly less than three quarters. For the, the UK were played in its own country was 21% and nearly its half 7% in Australia. Only of small fraction of Australian films were watched in both Australia and Britain which was nearly 5% and 11% respectively. The category specified as others were enjoying by Australians more than the British.
More over, in 1975 the cinema admissions in Australia was five folds greater than that in the UK. Nearly 20 million and 100 million people purchased cinema tickets in Australia and the UK respectively. The only time their difference narrowed was im 1981. The rate of cinema admissions then was 60 million in UK and 42 million in Australia . In the final year the class exhibited volatility and then mission reached 1 hour 160 million and 80 million respectively in UK and Australia

[antsatno]

Hi,

I can understand that this is your first post in the forum but you haven't posted any pictures of the bar graph. Its hard to correct your mistakes without the picture for Task 1. Hopefully I'm not wrong here.