Task 1 7+

[Aky]

Task 1
My response:
The graph gives information regarding various types of transportations which utilized from work to travel in city in the 1960s, 19980s and 2000s periods.

It is clear from the graph that train use was just below 20% around 19% and the use of car dropped markedly to about 6% and then tube and bus use increased steadily from approximately 27% to 39 % in 1960. In the 1980s, train reached a peak of just around 27%, car was utilized to reach of 37%. It is interesting to note that bus use saw a fall from about 26% in 1980 to 13 % in 2000.

Overall, it is apparent from the graph that in 1960 European city used mostly tube and bus. People utilized train from work to travel with a high interest in the 1980s. In 2000 car and tube increased expontentially.

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

This report is too short. Not all data is included. There are no comparisons. Vocabulary and grammar are limited, due to the short length. However, accuracy is quite good.

All the best,
David

[Flick]

Task 1
My response:
The graph gives information regarding various types of transportation used to travel to work in a European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

It is clear from the graph that train use was just below 20% around 19% and the use of car dropped markedly to about 6% and then tube and bus use increased steadily from approximately 27% to 39 % in 1960.(<--Reword to: "In 1960, cars accounted for 7% of commuters, trains for 19%, the tube for 28%, and the bus for 39%.") By 1980, train use reached a peak of around 27%, cars were utilized by 24%, the tube dropped to 21%, and the bus dropped to 26%. It is interesting to note that bus use saw a fall from about 26% in 1980 to 13 % in 2000.(<--Reword to: "By 2000, train, tube and bus use all decreased to 21%, 25% and 15% respectively, while car use jumped to 37%.")

Overall, it is apparent from the graph that in 1960, the European city used mostly the tube and bus. People utilized the train to commute most in the 1980s. In 2000, caruse increased significantly to become the most popular method of transport.