Choose the correct prepositions to complete this IELTS essay

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Choose the correct prepositions to complete this IELTS essay

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Test your preposition use in an IELTS context by trying this exercise:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yg1sUrA3yWY

Here is a text version of the exercise for those that cannot see the above video:
Competitiveness among high school students should be encouraged. Do you agree or disagree?

The gradual merging for / of / to cultures and economies the world over has led to an increasingly competitive international job market. Recognition of the role competitiveness plays in success has permeated most facets of society, and this includes the institutions that prepare students among / after / for adulthood. It is agreed that competitiveness for / towards / among high school students should be encouraged. The merits of this position will be shown by looking at how a competitive spirit can help train young people to both spot opportunity and cooperate with others.

Firstly, grooming students to be competitive at / around / before a young age can help prepare them to seize opportunities down the road. For example, in many countries, high school is followed by a period with / from / of intense competition, as students vie for scholarships, internships and career options. Students who are not naturally competitive or willing to improve their skills in relation to others will not achieve the same results as those that approach chance more aggressively. Thus, it is important to encourage competition among students at an early age to provide them with / against / through a strong start in life.

Furthermore, competition about / in / during team settings breeds cooperation, a trait that often acts as a precursor to success in life. For instance, to overcome an opponent, the members of a high school basketball team must work together to maximize their collective strengths. This acts as an example of how competition in a group setting can teach a young person the importance of teamwork, a valuable skill these young people will need in their future careers. Thus, it is clear that benefits do derive through / beyond / from the encouragement of competition in high school.

As the above shows, competitiveness is beneficial to teenagers because it prepares them to grab educational and professional opportunities and as well instills an understanding of the importance of cooperation. Thus, it can be concluded that there are clear and healthful advantages to encouraging competition beneath / among / across high school students. It is hoped this trait is increasingly instilled in / into / after the young people of tomorrow.
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1. of
2. for
3. among
4. at
5. of
6. with
7. in
8. from
9. among
10. in
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Hi Ryan,
I've got the answer right except for the two sentence below (which it sounds right to me):
8. Thus, it is clear that benefits do derive through / / the encouragement of competition in high school.
10. It is hoped this trait is increasingly instilled / into / the young people of tomorrow.

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Hi Domingo,

Nice to see you back here again after so long.

Yes, "derive through" and "instill into" are sometimes colloquially used. However, "derive from" and "instill in" are the couplings seen in the Oxford dictionary.

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thanks for the feedback ryan,.. im sure this info will come in handy.
and yes its been quite sometime...
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Thank you Mr. Ryan.
I got 10 upon 10.
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Hello Ryan
I have got 8 right answers out of 10 . Please comment on my level of understanding .
Thank you very much .

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Neena
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