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Guys need help.Please rate my essay

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Do you agree or disagree?Advertising can tell you a lot about a country.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.


It is undeniable that advertisements play a vital role in people lives.However,some people's opinion regarding this may vary.

In today's era,advertisement are more commercialised.Although advertisements include different aspects of the country like the tourist attractions,culture,environment and about the lifestyle of people in that country,but they do not tell much about the country.For instance,we see that most of mobile phones advertisements are done by Japanese models which suggests only one thing that Japan is technologically advanced country.Secondly,if we see advertisements like Incredible India,it tells us about the famous tourist attraction,fascinating places like Goa,Udaipur and about different cultures of North and South India which is truly amazing.However,if one comes to India he may get disappointed as the climate is very hot and humid in summers.There are as many as stray dogs due to which tourists have to wear full clothing to avoid the dog bite.Thirdly,there is lot of garbage everywhere which has become breeding grounds for flies and mosquitoes.This in turn give rises to many diseases like dengue,malaria.We can see many buffaloes shit on the street which stinks badly.It is not as safe for tourists as lately there were many rape cases.It does not tell us about caste system which is still prevalent in India.

To conclude,advertisemens are more commercialised nowadays.They do not tell us about the real side of country as I have mentioned earlier also.It only focuses on main tourist attractions.So one has to explore the country to know it deeply.
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