Task2- discussion- should go to Uni - David please evaluate it!

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Task2- discussion- should go to Uni - David please evaluate it!

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Some people think that everyone should go to University, while others believe that going to the University is not the best option for everybody.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In contemporary society, studying at a University is a basic requirement for all the pupils. While some people would contend that all schoolchildren should go to the University, many people would argue that it is not the best choice for everyone to be taught at the University. Both sides of this argument will be discussed before a reasonable conclusion is drawn.

On the one hand, some people are of opinion that everybody should study at the University. For instance, all the professional people like as doctors who must be taking a study for several years at the University. It is argued that students can gain knowledge from the University. Furthermore, schoolchildren study at the high institution can prove them that they are qualified people. Thus, it is understandable why many people gravitate toward this point of view.

However, on the other sides of this argument, many support the notion that taking courses at the University is not the first option for all people. To illustrate, Mark who is a CEO of Facebook. He had entered one of the most celebrity University – Harvard University. Although he gave up his study, he is still able to be a successful person in the world. Consequently, going to the advanced institution is not suitable for everyone. After analyzing this fact, it is certainly clear that why many have faith this claim.

In summary, both sides of this argument regarding all people should go to the University have strongly supported. However, after analyzing the two camps, it is clear that it is not the best option for people to be trained at the University. Also, I contend that it seems highly advisable for the government to provide financial supports to the education department. Therefore, it can offer different study pathways for all pupils choosing.
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Re: Task2- discussion- should go to Uni - David please evaluate it!

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rairaichan0115 wrote: Mon Aug 07, 2017 3:18 am Some people think that everyone should go to University, while others believe that going to the University is not the best option for everybody.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In contemporary society, studying at a university is a basic requirement for all the pupils. While some people would contend that all schoolchildren should go to university, many people would argue that it is not the best choice for everyone. Both sides of this argument will be discussed before a reasonable conclusion is drawn.

On the one hand, some people are of opinion that everybody should study at university. For instance, some professions, such as doctors must study for several years at a university. It is argued that students can gain knowledge from university. Furthermore, schoolchildren who study at a tertiary institution can prove that they are qualified people. Thus, it is understandable why many people gravitate toward this point of view.

However, on the other sides of this argument, many support the notion that taking courses at university is not the best option for all people. Take Mark Zuckerburg, the CEO of Facebook, for example. He had entered one of the best universities in the world – Harvard University. Although he gave up his study, he still became a successful businessman. Consequently, going to an advanced institution is not suitable for everyone. After analyzing this fact, it is certainly clear why many have faith in this claim.

In summary, both sides of this argument regarding all people should go to university are strongly supported. However, after analyzing the two camps, it is clear that it is not the best option for all people to be trained at a university. Also, I contend that it seems highly advisable for the government to provide financial support to the education department. Therefore, it can offer different study pathways for all pupils.
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