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writing task 2 please someone check it thanks.

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Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views regarding whether city life is harder or easier. In my opinion, there is no doubt that urban life is very stress full but despite of that there is many benefits to living in a city.

On the one hand, the main benefit of a city is that all high standard universities, schools at international levels and many other recognized private educational centers located in metropolitan areas that generate advantages for city dwellers to get a high-quality education that will help them in achieving a better job as compared to the remote areas school students. Another advantage of living in the city is the better transportation system. The government increasingly investing into public transport to make the commuting easier and smoother for their inhabitants and that facilities hardly available in the small villages. Furthermore, there are many cinemas as well as museums in the city for people to enjoy relaxing moments with their family.

On the other hand, urban citizens may be confronted with various problems. Firstly, in the city the cost of living is higher than that in small towns and villages, because city dwellers might have to pay higher prices for transport service and household bills. Secondly, high population density in the urban areas may cause overcrowding, followed by a lack of open spaces for green trees and other recreational activities for metropolitan residents. Finally, the thousands of tons of smoke released form factories, homes along with motor bikes and from other transportation make the city environment polluted and as a result of these many health problems arises.

In conclusion, there are numerous difficulties of residing into the city, but from my point of view, living in the city is much easier and beneficial.
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jaggi7921 wrote: Tue Jun 20, 2017 3:53 am Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views regarding whether city life is harder or easier than rural living. In my opinion, there is no doubt that urban life is very stressful, however, there are many benefits to living in a city.

On the one hand, the main benefit of a city is that all high standard universities, schools at international levels and many other recognized private educational centers located in metropolitan areas that generate advantages for city dwellers to get a high-quality education that will help them in achieving a better job as compared to the remote areas school students.(<--This sentence is too long. Reword to: "The main benefit of a city is ease of access to universities, internationally-recognized schools and many other private educational centers. These make it easier for city dwellers to get a high-quality education that will help them in securing a better job as compared to more rural students." Another advantage of living in the city is the better transportation system. The government is increasingly investing in public transport to make commuting easier and smoother for city inhabitants and that facilities hardly available in the small villages(<--I don't understand what you mean here.). Furthermore, there are many cinemas as well as museums in the city for people to enjoy relaxing moments with their family.

On the other hand, urban citizens may be confronted with various problems. Firstly, in the city the cost of living is higher than in small towns and villages, because city dwellers might have to pay higher prices for transport services and household bills. Secondly, high population density in the urban areas may cause overcrowding, followed by a lack of open spaces for green trees and other recreational activities for metropolitan residents. Finally, the thousands of tons of smoke released from factories, homes and vehicles create pollution which may cause health problems for many citizens.

In conclusion, there are numerous difficulties when residing in a city, but from my point of view, living in the city is much easier and more beneficial than living in a rural area.
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