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Xbb
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Discipline topic needs your review

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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In today’s fast paced life, there are growing concerns about how educating discipline should be conducted amongst students. While it is believed by some that discipline education should belong to educators’ duties, others argue that it should be indeed parents’ fulfillment. In my opinion, both educators and parents hold equal importance in developing the trait of discipline of the youth.

On the one hand, teachers remain significantly crucial in educating discipline to a wide range of students. This is due to the fact that teachers hold the very key role of imparting from fundamental to advanced knowledge; they should include the domain of developing discipline in their learners. Particularly, it is universally accepted that academia is the formal environment where teachers operate classes with clearly predefined policies and homework deadlines; educators must have better roles to develop the punctuality and sense of responsibility from students through various exercises and deadlines which directly affect their progress scores and require strict adherence from young learners. As a result, students who undergo this rigorous process could be naturally developed into disciplinal individuals in the future.

On the other hand, the impact of parents in developing discipline in their offsprings remains vital. It goes without saying that children spend more time at home than that of other venues, hence, parents indeed should be the ones to teach and set examples in terms of being responsible and punctual for their children’s replication. Particularly, parents can put high concentration on household chores assignments with clearly targeted completion time which are proven extremely effective to develop the sense of punctuality and responsibility amongst children. For instance, my sister’s eight year old son now can complete the stints at home with ease while still manage to secure the National Award for Good Students, which should be attributed to the trainings and examples demonstrated by his parents since he was much younger that help him develop the ability of responsibility fulfilling.

In conclusion, I personally believe that both teachers and parents are equally vital in horning the trait of discipline amongst children and it would be better for the society as a whole to have all of them collaborate efficiently.
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Re: Discipline topic needs your review

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Xbb wrote: Tue May 02, 2017 3:17 am Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In today’s fast paced life, there are growing concerns about how discipline should be conducted amongst students. While it is believed by some that discipline should be part of the educators’ duties, others argue that it should be the parents' responsibility. In my opinion, both educators and parents hold equal importance in disciplining students.

On the one hand, teachers play a crucial role in disciplining their students. This is due to the fact that teachers impart knowledge; they should include the domain of developing discipline in their learners. Particularly, it is universally accepted that academia is the formal environment where teachers operate classes with clearly predefined policies and homework deadlines; educators must have better roles to develop the punctuality and sense of responsibility from students through various exercises and deadlines which directly affect their progress scores and require strict adherence from young learners.(<--This sentence is too long. I don't understand.) As a result, students who undergo this rigorous process become disciplined individuals in the future.

On the other hand, the impact of parents in developing discipline in their offspring remains vital. It goes without saying that children spend more time at home than anywhere else, hence, parents should be the ones to teach and set examples in terms of being responsible and punctual. Particularly, parents can place high importance on household chores with clearly targeted completion times. This can be extremely effective to develop the sense of punctuality and responsibility amongst children. For instance, my sister’s eight year old son can now complete chores at home with ease while still managing to secure the National Award for Good Students, which should be attributed to the training and examples demonstrated by his parents since he was much younger.

In conclusion, I personally believe that both teachers and parents are equally vital in honing the trait of discipline amongst children, and it would be better for the society as a whole to have all of them collaborate efficiently.
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