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Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news.

Do you think all news is true?

What is the function of a newspaper?

It is thought by many that facts should be unbiased and not to be bigoted for personal reasons when it comes to publishing news . Yet , due to interference of influential people and to damage popularity of famous people many journalist fabricate news . Because of these reasons I believe that news are not always authentic . This essay is going to discus the questionable authenticity of news and what is the purpose of newspaper in our life .
News feeds are increasingly losing their trustworthiness all around the world . There are several reasons behind this concern . Firstly , the bribery of journalists by politician and higher authorities to manipulate new and paint picture that goes in their favour . To illustrate , after the earthquake of 2008 many Pakistani journalist were allegedly paid by government to publish how well rehabilitation is going on , however in fact no work was done for the affected . It got uncovered by people who visited affected area themselves . Secondly , to defame celebrities many journalists publish fake news . For example , the publication of drug abuse by famous singer Justin briber to destroy his career . Later on got denied by the singer himself when he posted it on his social media that he is not engaged in drug addiction . These examples clearly shows why the news we get are not always based on factual information .
Despite growing concern , that news are losing their authenticity , many people around the globe start their day by reading the copy of their favourite news paper . The function of news paper is considered crucial in our life and society . It gives people an insight of what's happening both locally and internationally. Similarly , it plays a role of watch dog and uncover wrongdoings in our society . Moreover , news paper tend to entertain people in form of giving articles for pleasure reading , word puzzles and comic section. In addition , the marketing and advertising newspaper do is benefiting both local and international businesses .
To conclude , the news we get are often not based actual facts due to certain reasons . However , newspaper serves a strong purpose of giving insight , entertainment and advertisements.
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sadaf wrote: Sun Feb 05, 2017 11:03 pm Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news.

Do you think all news is true?

What is the function of a newspaper?

It is thought by many that facts should be unbiased and not slanted for personal reasons when it comes to publishing news. Yet, due to interference of influential people and in order to damage the popularity of famous people, many journalists fabricate news. Because of these reasons, I believe that news is not always authentic. This essay is going to discus the questionable authenticity of news and what is the purpose of newspapers in our life.

News feeds are increasingly losing their trustworthiness all around the world. There are several reasons behind this. Firstly, the bribery of journalists by politicians and higher authorities to manipulate the news and paint a picture that favours those in power. To illustrate, after the earthquake of 2008, many Pakistani journalists were allegedly paid by government to publish how well rehabilitation was progressing. However, in reality, no work was done for the affected. This was uncovered by people who visited the affected area themselves. Secondly, to defame celebrities, many journalists publish fake news. For example, the allegation of drug abuse by famous singer Justin Bieber was an attempt to destroy his career. Later on this was denied by the singer himself when he posted on his social media that he was not engaged in drug use. These examples clearly show why the news we get is not always based on factual information.

Despite growing concern that news outlets are losing their authenticity, many people around the globe start their day by reading their favourite newspaper. The function of newspapers is considered crucial in our life and society. It gives people an insight into what's happening both locally and internationally. Similarly, it plays the role of watch dog and uncovers wrongdoings in our society. Moreover, newspapers tend to entertain people by providing articles for pleasure reading, word puzzles and a comic section. In addition, the marketing and advertising newspapers do benefits both local and international businesses.

To conclude, the news we get is often not based on actual facts due to various reasons. However, newspapers serve a strong purpose of giving insight, entertainment and advertisements.
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