Pls evaluate the essay ! Thx!!

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wangyue6662010
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Pls evaluate the essay ! Thx!!

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prabhakar reddy
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Re: Pls evaluate the essay ! Thx!!

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Hi Wangyue,

Where is the question? How can I check your essay, when I don't know what the question is? Send it in word document. How can I correct your hand-written essay, when it requires a lot many corrections.

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wangyue6662010
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Pls evaluate the essay ! Thx!!

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prabhakar reddy wrote:Hi Wangyue,

Where is the question? How can I check your essay, when I don't know what the question is? Send it in word document. How can I correct your hand-written essay, when it requires a lot many corrections.

Prabhakar reddy

Professor of English and IELTS Tutor
Email. preddy2407Gmail.com

The topic is:

many people believe that healthy eating and the importance of healthy food should be taught in school. Others say that parents should teach their kids about healthy food and diet. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Pls simply tell me some feedback. thank you !




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