Please check my task 1 :-) thanks in advance

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luke Thompson
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Please check my task 1 :-) thanks in advance

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The given is the line graph indicating the data on the usage of various means of railway by British Travellers over 55 years between 1950 and 2005.

By and large, it is apparent from supplied information that All three railways saw upward trends With considerable increase by 2005.

As to the details, Increasing from approximately 1000 million in 1950 to virtual 1.100 million in 1960, the number of travellers on National rail network plunged to 600 ml in 1980. This was followed by a period of exponential rise, with doubling to almost 1.100 in 2005.

Concerning other two figures, the for London underground users remained during the first decades at 7 million . Having decreased sharply to 500 ml in 1980, the pattern experienced a significant rise to just below 900 million in 2004 . The number of commuters of high rail and metro system, Meanwhile, fluctuated somewhere at a mere 1 and 20 until 1980, before rising gradually to almost 200 million users in 2005
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David.IELTS.Examiner
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Re: Please check my task 1 :-) thanks in advance

Post by David.IELTS.Examiner »

Hello!

Overall, a good report. You have got the main trends and identified key points in the timelines. Be careful to include accurate figures. Vocabulary and grammar are both good, with meaning clear throughout the report.

All the best,
David
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