Please can you check my W T1

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insaf
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Please can you check my W T1

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The line graph compares the waste production of companies A, B and C, between 2000 and 2015. Units are measured in Tonnes.

Overall, while company A showed a constant decline in the waste production, company C continue to produce more waste throughout the period shown. Company B, on the other hand, had a gradual rise followed by a dramatic drop in its waste production.

In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste compared to 8,4 tonnes of waste for companies B and C respectively. Five years later, waste production for company A fell steeply to around 11 tonnes whereas company B rose its waste production to 10 and company C doubled its waste production (from 3 tonnes in 2000 to 6 tonnes in 2005).

Between 2005 and 2015, there was a dramatic drop in the waste produced by company B, from 10 tonnes in 2005 ending the period at 3 tonnes. However, company C continue to increase its waste considerably and at 2015 it produced about 10 tonnes. Company A waste production fell gradually to 8 by 2015.
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David.IELTS.Examiner
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Re: Please can you check my W T1

Post by David.IELTS.Examiner »

Hello!

This is an easy graph, but good for preparation. You have described it very well, clearly, with good vocabulary and grammar.

Well done!
David
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