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Daily (Mon-Fri) speech exercises with Ryan through Whatsapp
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abbasazarmehrput
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Please critique this recorded file

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Part 2 speaking

Describe someone you know who does something well.

You should say:

Who this person is

How you know this person

What they do well

And explain why you think this person is so good at doing this
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David.IELTS.Examiner
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Hello!

Fluency - Good speed, despite some pauses. Perhaps work on this a little more.
Coherence - A very good range of connectives used correctly.
Vocabulary - Very good range used correctly!
Grammar - A very good range of structures used correctly, with a minimal number of mistakes that do not interfere with understanding.
Pronunciation - Very good. Clear (with a few mispronunciations), with some good use of stress and intonation.

Overall, very good, with only the fluency needing improvement to get a high score.

Well done!
David
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