Pls grade my speaking for band 8. Need that :)

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Nish89
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Pls grade my speaking for band 8. Need that :)

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saqibali
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Re: Pls grade my speaking for band 8. Need that :)

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Dear Nisha,
I have few points below.
1.Please add cohesive devices.Check my posts for details.
http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.p ... =720#p2318

2.Take a pause and collect your words before you speak.That's why you presentation of sentences will be very effective.
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allen_zhang
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Re: Pls grade my speaking for band 8. Need that :)

Post by allen_zhang »

...I just want to see if I can help others - I am also a learner but want to contribute a little to this community.
However... I found it is so hard for me to understand the accent of people from places other than China!!
"In 2003, I flew to Dubai, the primary reason for going to Dubai was to appear for my PMP exam. it.....my career, so the reason for flying to Dubai was ... to give the exam.but.. having a lot of fun... "
sorry, too hard for me to follow...
#1 2013-09-07 L7.5; R8; S6; W6
#2 2014-03-08 L7.5; R7; S7; W5.5
#3 2014-05-10 L7.5; R8; S6.5; W6
#4 2014-06-21 L7.5; R6.5; S5.5; W7
#4 2014-06-21 L7.5; R6.5; S7; W5.5
Nish89
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Re: Pls grade my speaking for band 8. Need that :)

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thanks all who provided feedback. I will work harder - this was one of my first specimens
will share some more
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