please assess my speaking, I have failed to achieve 7 twice.

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kharelshishir
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please assess my speaking, I have failed to achieve 7 twice.

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http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/file.php?id=30

Both the previous times, i got 6.5 in speaking. However, my target is 7.
kindly please advice
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kharelshishir
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Re: please assess my speaking, I have failed to achieve 7 tw

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Dear Ryan,

Your few words regarding how i could fix my speaking would help me a lot.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Anticipating your valuable response,

Shishir Kharel
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Hey Shishir
I just came across this post.Listening your recording i like it, specially the speaking flow and little bit pronunciation.But the follow up suggestions i want to say is improve your vocabulary, mix up the ideas, try to express more in the allocated time.I encouraged by your post and i am
anticipating that i will upload my recording.

mridul
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first attempt - 5.5
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Re: please assess my speaking, I have failed to achieve 7 tw

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Well, I am not too good in speaking. I also had scored 6.5 in speaking, but I my target is 7. Your speaking is not bad you can speak ,but important thing is you are not confident ,whilst speaking it shows that you are speaking without thinking. Another is you are producing sound like umm ,ahha many times , which I think should not be done.
Main thing is if you practice more ,you probably would increase your fluency.
Goodluck
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My comment was for Shishir ,thanks
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kharelshishir wrote:http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/file.php?id=30

Both the previous times, i got 6.5 in speaking. However, my target is 7.
kindly please advice
"training in" not "training on"
"it was 3 days completely full of fun" not "it was a 3 day full of fun".
Lacks fluency/confidence: try speaking a lot more in English on a regular basis - quite accurate otherwise.
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Thank you everyone for your comment.
I am happy to share with you all that i finally scored 7.5 a week back.
your comments helped.
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kharelshishir wrote:Thank you everyone for your comment.
I am happy to share with you all that i finally scored 7.5 a week back.
your comments helped.
Congratulations.
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