Pls review - Important choice

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Xbb
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Pls review - Important choice

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Describe an important choice you had to make in your life.
You should say:
When you had this choice
What you had to choose between
Whether you made a good choice
And explain how you felt when you were making this choice
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David.IELTS.Examiner
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Re: Pls review - Important choice

Post by David.IELTS.Examiner »

Hello!

Fluency - Very, very slow speech. Not many pauses, however.

Coherence - Good use of a variety of connectives.

Vocabulary - Very little detail. It's actually pretty unclear what you mean. No examples. What job did you do? What do you want to do? What scenery?

Grammar - Good basic grammar. Few complex structures.

Pronunciation - Clear, with some intonation, though this could be improved.

Overall, mediocre at best.

All the best,
David
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Re: Pls review - Important choice

Post by Xbb »

Many thanks, David.
Seeming I'm stuck with speaking as my weakest skill.
David.IELTS.Examiner wrote: Mon May 08, 2017 3:20 am Hello!

Fluency - Very, very slow speech. Not many pauses, however.

Coherence - Good use of a variety of connectives.

Vocabulary - Very little detail. It's actually pretty unclear what you mean. No examples. What job did you do? What do you want to do? What scenery?

Grammar - Good basic grammar. Few complex structures.

Pronunciation - Clear, with some intonation, though this could be improved.

Overall, mediocre at best.

All the best,
David
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