Please correct my speaking to Ban 9

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Miaacoby
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Please correct my speaking to Ban 9

Postby Miaacoby » Tue Sep 20, 2016 6:59 pm

Please correct my speaking to Ban 9

Sorry for using Vocaroo. The file size was too big to upload.


http://vocaroo.com/i/s0WGbfE4p0AI

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FastTrackIELTS
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Re: Please correct my speaking to Ban 9

Postby FastTrackIELTS » Sat Dec 31, 2016 4:06 pm

Hello brother,

Overall this is a great speaking test. There are a few improvements you could make to improve your English speaking fluency.

FEEDBACK

- lots of improvements not loads

- very good about consumption of fuel

- you've repeated the bicycle usage for their daily needs. bicycle usage could be made more simple as 'using a bicycle or bike'

- I use 'the' bicycle.

- Very good word congested to use to describe the heavy traffic in your city.

- Very good description of the vast range of bicycle manufacturing to support your argument.

- bicycle require should be the bicycle requires

- it requires very less space - should be it requires very little space

- POSITIVE: good conclusion and comparison to a car in terms of space saving.

- Mother Theresa - done a lot of joy should be has given a lot of joy to people'

- Good amount of information on Mother Theresa however it sounded as if you read it from a paper. Try to remember these facts more fluidly if you want to speak on them.

- TIP: Try to use google translate on English words that you don't know.

- Good answer to the question.

- I infer that is a good way of stating what you think and beginning your thoughts.

- POSITIVE Overall very good speaking test. You are quite intelligent and it comes through in your answers. Where you need to improve is practicing your speaking with a teacher. If you are looking for a band 9.0 then it is achievable for you.

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Good luck brother.
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