My First Recording

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mirghani
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My First Recording

Post by mirghani » Sun Jul 10, 2016 8:15 am

Please give me feedback, thank you a lot for your help :)
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David.IELTS.Examiner
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Re: My First Recording

Post by David.IELTS.Examiner » Sun Jul 10, 2016 8:46 am

Hello Mirghani!

Fluency - Speech is a little slow and there are some pauses, but still good overall.

Coherence - Good range of connectives. Good sentence order.

Vocabulary - Good, with some interesting details. This is your best feature.

Grammar - Quite good basic grammar. A few complex structures, but you should include more.

Pronunciation - Clear with some intonation. However, more intonation is needed. Put some life and feeling into your answer!

Overall, certainly not bad, but I suspect you could easily do better.

All the best,
David

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