Describe a school that you went to when you were a child. You should say
- where the school was
- when you went there
- what the school and the teachers were like
- and explain whether you enjoyed your time there.
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Please Help to Correct the Speaking on School
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Re: Please Help to Correct the Speaking on School
Paritosh,
Thank you for sharing about your school. It sounds as if you had a great school and wonderful teachers who really valued their students.
Your vocabulary is really good. I heard these words: originally founded, constructed, credit, implement, to name just a few.
You organized your speech well and covered all the points. You might use a few more connecting words to make your ideas flow together even better. “Additionally,” “Moreover,” etc. can help your speech move smoothly from one topic to another.
The speech was very fluent. You don’t have hesitancies when you speak, but you should consider slowing down and enunciating more clearly. You are quite difficult to understand at times.
Here are some grammar notes:
as for my nature. . . – FOR my nature, this school was
first for the teachers is – First, I’d like to discuss the teachers.
on the top of it? – I don’t know exactly what this phrase was supposed to mean.
batch – class Maybe you say “batch” in India/Britain when you refer to a group of classmates you went to school with, but as an American, I am used to saying the word “class.” For example, there were about 300 people in my graduating class of 2001.
later on, I was managed – I managed
on the top of the list to every family living nearby – OF every family
Best wishes as you continue to practice!
Thank you for sharing about your school. It sounds as if you had a great school and wonderful teachers who really valued their students.
Your vocabulary is really good. I heard these words: originally founded, constructed, credit, implement, to name just a few.
You organized your speech well and covered all the points. You might use a few more connecting words to make your ideas flow together even better. “Additionally,” “Moreover,” etc. can help your speech move smoothly from one topic to another.
The speech was very fluent. You don’t have hesitancies when you speak, but you should consider slowing down and enunciating more clearly. You are quite difficult to understand at times.
Here are some grammar notes:
as for my nature. . . – FOR my nature, this school was
first for the teachers is – First, I’d like to discuss the teachers.
on the top of it? – I don’t know exactly what this phrase was supposed to mean.
batch – class Maybe you say “batch” in India/Britain when you refer to a group of classmates you went to school with, but as an American, I am used to saying the word “class.” For example, there were about 300 people in my graduating class of 2001.
later on, I was managed – I managed
on the top of the list to every family living nearby – OF every family
Best wishes as you continue to practice!
Re: Please Help to Correct the Speaking on School
Thanks so so much Imoore once again, I am working on my Grammar. Hope i conquer it soon.