Sentence reorder

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leodibkk
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Sentence reorder

Postby leodibkk » Tue Jan 12, 2016 9:53 am

Hi all,

I have a question regarding shuffling the order of structure in a sentence as such the original one is

-> Though this is not a good solution to stop people driving car to commute, it does help to mitigate traffic congestion during peak hours.

And is it accurate that this sentence is converted as follow?

-> This solution does help, though it is not a good one to stop people driving car to commute, to mitigate traffic congestion during peak hours.

Thanks for your comments

Cliff.IELTS.Examiner
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Re: Sentence reorder

Postby Cliff.IELTS.Examiner » Sat Feb 06, 2016 1:45 am

The first rendering is correct. The second is awkward and unclear.


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