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can you suggest grammatical structures that i could incorporte in my essays ?

Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2016 1:27 pm
by Vodo_Virus
Hi fellow students and instructors

my grammatical range is usually compromised in my essays ... i tend to write naturally as i speak which is kind of limited in grammatical structures

so my request is that you suggest grammatical structures that i could effectively implement in my writing

for example

using passive sound
conditionals
the more ... the more
complex sentences ( examples please )

what else you may suggest ?

i have problems with cohesion and coherence too but this is another Q :D

my goal is 7 but 8 would be ideal

Re: can you suggest grammatical structures that i could incorporte in my essays ?

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2016 11:49 am
by FastTrackIELTS
Hi Vodo Virus,

I'd be more than happy to help however rather than suggesting structures you can use, it'd be better for you to post a sample of your writing and I will offer suggestions for improvement.

The problem with suggesting grammatical devices to use is that they may not be relevant in every essay. It is a much better habit to focus on the core principles. If you'd like to post some writing of yours (or you could answer the question 'Technology is increasingly becoming a big part of modern life. Suggest positive and negative effects of using technology and give your opinion on it's overall effect.')

I hope to hear from you soon and will be more than happy to work with you to improve your writing. :)

Jordan