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Question : - Few peoepl devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effects this has on the individual and the society in general. My essay :- A hobby is a way to spend spare time constructively and creatively. From historical ages, people engage themselves to learn ...

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WRT second arguement , how technology has made transportation quicker is not clear.
Para is telling importance of transportation , how is it related to tech?
Trasportation is not technology !!!!.

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My thoughts:- 1."It has been a hot debate " looks incorrect - It has been debated a lot. 2. Intro first sentense is too long and difficult to follow. 3. until this process will repeat himself or process repeats itself ? 4. wich spelling is incorrect. 5. "First of all, a crucial import...

Hi Below is my ans. Pls evaluate. " Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction for the recently conducted " Auto CAD design course". This was a hands on experience course conducted by Master Design Institute. I regret to tell you that the arrangements done ...

well in the context which u hv written i feel " strict attendance record should be taken, and people who who have enrolled in advance should only be allowed to attend the class. No last minute entry should be allowed, supervisor shd ensure etc " may sound appropriate . BTW how are when is ...

Hi, In my opinion the letter does not address the question part "what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again"? . If you are allowed to sit in course for free , problem will not get solved, it is still there. Good use of vocab, but i am not sure "You see" is a co...