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Hello! This is a very good essay! Your points are very clear and well-developed. Organisation is very clear with very good use of connectives. The range and accuracy of the grammatical structures is very good. There are some very complex structures using modals that are produced perfectly. The range...

Hello! This is a good essay. Your points are good and developed. I appreciate that, in the first main paragraph, you specify IT companies in India. The range and accuracy of the grammar is good. Mistakes do not change meaning or interfere with comprehension. The range of vocabulary is very good, wit...

Hello! Your points are good, but I'm afraid that the excessive number of grammatical errors can interfere with meaning. You do develop the points and vocabulary is used quite well. Try not to have one main paragraph twice as long as the other. Basically, time to get out the grammar books. I also sug...

Hello! This is a BRILLIANT question!!! This phrase is SO BADLY used by many IELTS candidates! Let's see how you do ... The introduction is a little long (compared with the main paragraphs). Overall, your points are reasonable, but I think that you need to be a little more specific. The second main p...

Hello! This is a very good essay. Your points are clear with some good development. Organisation is clear, with very good use of connectives. The range and accuracy of grammatical structures is impressive. You have used a nice variety of vocabulary, including some high-level, topic-specific items (i...

Hello! Overall, a good essay. I think that the crime aspect is a little weak, and you do seem to focus on basketball, but your other points/examples are good and you do add some development. Organisation is clear with good use of connectives. Vocabulary and grammar are good. Be a bit careful with mo...

Hello! This is a very good essay. The variety of grammatical structures and precise use of vocabulary is quite impressive. There are mistakes, but relatively few and they do not really interfere with meaning. Your points are clear, valid, and well-developed. Organisation is good, but I think that yo...

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Good essay! Your points are clear, valid and developed - well done!

Vocabulary and grammar are both good, with a nice range and high accuracy. However, please be careful with 'will' and try to use a wider variety of modals to express exact meaning.

All the best,
David

Hello! I like this essay. Your points are simple, but valid. I think you need to develop/explain them in more detail though. Vocabulary is a little limited (again, more specific development needed) but you certainly have enough vocab to answer the question. Grammar is also quite good, with a nice va...

Hello! I see that you have posted 2 topics. I appreciate the enthusiasm, but it's probably better to wait for an evaluation and then do a second set a few days or a week later. Fluency - Speech is a little slow and there are quite a lot of pauses and some repetition. This is clearly your weakest poi...

Hello! Your points are very good! The development isn't great, but good enough. Vocabulary is very good, with some topic-specific items. The range of grammatical structures is wide, but there quite a lot of errors. However, these do tend to be with complex structures. I suggest cutting down the leng...

Hello! This graph is a little tricky, but your report is quite good. You have a good summary, but the details are lacking. You definitely need more figures. I suggest taking each line in turn and leaving a comparison mainly for the summary. Vocabulary and grammar are both good. You use some good 'ch...

Hello! Great question!!! First main paragraph - The first 3 sentences are wrong. Some people inherit a lot of money. Others rely on welfare. Then there is charity. The rest of the paragraph is, to me, a little incoherent. I'm not totally sure what you are trying to say ... or even which side of the ...

Hello! Overall, quite a good essay. The main problem is that you express yourself very simply. Your writing lacks adverbs of frequency and degree for example. Your points are good and developed to some extent. The range of grammar and vocabulary is good and mistakes are relatively infrequent. So, no...

Hello! Ah, a classic question where almost everyone forgets one thing! Let's see how you do ... First main paragraph - good. A little more detail would be an improvement. Second main paragraph - Almost all candidates fail to provide a solid reason/example for the 'loss of culture'. You have at least...

Hello! Your points are basically reasonable, but I think that you need to develop them in a clearer way, for instance by using specific examples. One or two points are a little unclear and need clarification, e.g. how to reduce water use and are people really unaware of the cost of water? Vocabulary...

Hello! Overall, a reasonable essay. Your points are good. The development is reasonable, but a little repetitious and I think you would do better to use specific examples. The grammar is quite good, though I'd prefer to see a wider range of structures, e.g. conditionals. You do tend to use 'will' in...

Hello! Fluency - Speech is quite slow with many pauses Coherence - Reasonable range of connectives. Good sentence order Vocabulary - Limited. Ideas are expressed very simply Grammar - Many mistakes. Future tense is not used correctly much of the time (you tend to use the present). Few complex struct...

Hello! This is a good essay. A more personal conclusion would be better. Points are clear and developed. Organisation is also clear, with a good range of connectives used correctly. The range of vocabulary is very good, with some topic-specific items. However, the range of grammar is quite limited, ...

Hello! Overall, quite a good essay. Your points are good, but sometimes not developed enough. A good thing would be to give examples. Organisation is clear with a good range of connectives. The range of both grammar and vocabulary are a little limited. However, accuracy is quite good. I think you co...

Hello! This is a good essay. Your points are clear and developed. Organisation is clear with a good range of connectives used correctly. Vocabulary is also good, with some topic-specific items. The key thing you need to work on is grammar. Range is good, but could be better. Accuracy is not so good ...

Hello! This is quite a good essay. Your points are clear, but they do need more development. Organisation is clear. The range of vocabulary is good, with some topic-specific items. However, the range and accuracy of grammar needs to be improved. (The range can be easily dealt with by making the essa...

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This is a good report. You have noted the key trends and points and described the graph with good detail.

The range of language is good, though there are quite a lot of grammatical errors. Organisation is clear and you have used a good range of connectives correctly.

All the best,
David

Hello! This is a good report. You only missed the point that the cement mixer rotates (quite a lot of people miss that!). Vocabulary is quite basic, but it is certainly enough to do the job. The range of grammar is also good, despite some mistakes. You overuse 'then'. Try to use a wider variety of c...

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This is a very good essay. Points are clear and well developed. Organisation is also clear with good use of a range of connectives.

Vocabulary is very good, with some topic-specific items. The range of grammatical structures is very good with relatively few errors.

Well done!
David