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- Tue Nov 24, 2015 5:23 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: How to improve my letter writing
- Replies: 4
- Views: 835
Re: How to improve my letter writing
Thank you Flick Here is an essay and letter kindly assess it and give me a feedback. Some people believe that zoos where animals are kept in man-made environment should no longer exist in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree? Zoos are the places where several animals are kept. Some groups of p...
- Mon Nov 23, 2015 5:37 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: How to improve my writing tasks 1 and 2
- Replies: 2
- Views: 884
How to improve my writing tasks 1 and 2
Hello, You have decided to leave your job and need to inform your company about your decision. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter, Explain why you are leaving Express your thanks for what you learned at the company Suggest the sort of person who could replace you Dear Mr.Thomas, I am Vish...
- Thu Nov 19, 2015 12:36 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: How to improve my letter writing
- Replies: 4
- Views: 835
How to improve my letter writing
Hello, You have decided to leave your job and need to inform your company about your decision. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter, Explain why you are leaving Express your thanks for what you learned at the company Suggest the sort of person who could replace you Dear Sir, I am Vishwa Vin...
- Wed Nov 18, 2015 1:21 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay evaluation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4093
How to improve my G.t task 1 letter
Hello, here is a letter. Writing task 1 (a letter) You have been living in an apartment for a year. Recently the landlord notified you about rent increase starting from next month. Write a complaint letter to him/her and say - Introduce yourself and describe your situation. - Explain why you cannot ...
- Mon Nov 16, 2015 3:14 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay evaluation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4093
Re: Essay evaluation
Hello, here is a letter. Writing task 1 (a letter) You have been living in an apartment for a year. Recently the landlord notified you about rent increase starting from next month. Write a complaint letter to him/her and say - Introduce yourself and describe your situation. - Explain why you cannot ...
- Fri Nov 13, 2015 10:11 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay evaluation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4093
Re: Essay evaluation
Hello Mr. David,
I will soon post the improved version of { written assessment } essay.
Thanking you,
Vishwa.
I will soon post the improved version of { written assessment } essay.
Thanking you,
Vishwa.
- Fri Nov 13, 2015 10:08 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay evaluation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4093
Re: Essay evaluation
Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree? Women have guts and accomplishment t...
- Thu Nov 12, 2015 12:50 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay evaluation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4093
Re: Essay evaluation
Hello, Here is an essay. Question In education, assessment through formal written examination is still valid. Discuss. Answer: Without any doubt, it is true that, education system still uses the formal written examination to assess a student’s caliber and talent. Advancements in technology has opene...
- Wed Nov 11, 2015 6:48 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay evaluation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4093
Re: Essay evaluation
Hello,
After reading your response, I went through my essay and saw very silly and strange mistakes, which could had been avoided in case I proofread before posting.
I suppose not to repeat such mistakes in my further essays.
Thanking you,
Vishwa.
After reading your response, I went through my essay and saw very silly and strange mistakes, which could had been avoided in case I proofread before posting.
I suppose not to repeat such mistakes in my further essays.
Thanking you,
Vishwa.
- Tue Nov 10, 2015 5:32 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay evaluation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4093
Re: Essay evaluation
Hello, Question: The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flights should be taxed more? Give reasons for your answer a...
- Mon Nov 09, 2015 1:57 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay evaluation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4093
Essay evaluation
Hello, Here is an essay. It is believed by many people that ‘If people have more money, they are generally happier.’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 wo...
- Sun Nov 08, 2015 9:23 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay evaluation
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1109
Re: Essay evaluation
Hello, Here is an essay on free health care. Every government has a duty to provide free health care for its people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of government providing free health care? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experienc...
- Fri Nov 06, 2015 1:06 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay evaluation
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1109
Essay evaluation
The idea of students assessing their teachers is a good one or not, what is your opinion. Teachers demand admiration and respect from their students. Traditionally, their duty is imparting knowledge and assessing the students. Now, the idea of reversal of roles that is teachers’ assessment by studen...
- Fri Nov 06, 2015 9:20 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: How can I improve my writing
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1328
Re: How can I improve my writing
Thanks a lot Mr. David.
I would really grateful to you, if you give me an approximate band for this essay.
I would really grateful to you, if you give me an approximate band for this essay.
- Thu Nov 05, 2015 2:01 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: How can I improve my writing
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1328
How can I improve my writing
Hello, I kindly request the active examiners of this website to assess my essay and give me the feedback with approximate band score. Below is the essay written by me. Nowadays, people always throw the old things away when they buy new things, some people claim that the broken things should be repai...