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- Wed May 17, 2017 4:40 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my writing task 2
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1264
Re: Please evaluate my writing task 2
Hello! I don't understand the fourth sentence of the first main paragraph, though I think I know what you want to say. Overall, this is a very good essay. I'd prefer a more personal conclusion, but your opinion is clear. The points are all valid and most are well-developed and clear. The variety of ...
- Wed May 17, 2017 4:31 am
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: stammering problem
- Replies: 1
- Views: 8055
Re: stammering problem
Hello Mandeep! I'm not familiar with the situation in India. Is it possible to go to a foreign doctor to get a certificate? Perhaps you could check with the BC/IDP to see what they say. I don't actually know what happens to the speaking scores for candidates with stammers. We have procedures for exa...
- Wed May 17, 2017 4:27 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: IELTS Academic Writing 1 - Pleaaaase assess my writing
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1645
Re: IELTS Academic Writing 1 - Pleaaaase assess my writing
Hello! (Please post in the writing section next time.) Make your summary clearer and use it to look at the overall trend rather than just one or two pieces of information. Your description of the detail is good in terms of describing the line, but not so good in terms of grammar. Vocabulary is a lit...
- Wed May 17, 2017 4:21 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Assess my Part 3 speaking
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8651
Re: Assess my Part 3 speaking
Hello! Fluency - Good speed. Pauses are generally appropriate. Coherence - Very good use of a range of connectives. Vocabulary - Very good! Perfect use of 'bs'. Great examples in your answers. I love the way you divide up the answers, e.g. cities/countryside with regard to internet access (It's shoc...
- Mon May 15, 2017 3:55 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: I would be very grateful if someone could give me some feedback
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1767
Re: I would be very grateful if someone could give me some feedback
Hello! Introduction is nearly as long as the main paragraphs! I'm not very convinced by the main points. Companies that use trees usually DO plant more - it's how they make money! I'm pretty sure Coca-Cola does not recycle all its plastic. (Which country?) Paying taxes is something companies are req...
- Mon May 15, 2017 2:55 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please task 2 exam is coming soon
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1394
Re: please task 2 exam is coming soon
Hello! This is quite a good essay. Your points are clear and each has some development. However, I do note - yet again!!! - that the introduction is longer than the main paragraphs. The introduction and conclusion are not as good as the main paragraphs. you fail to explain how parks are an integral ...
- Mon May 15, 2017 2:45 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Please Leave your comment which might be really helpful
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8679
Re: Please Leave your comment which might be really helpful
Hello! Fluency - Speech is quite slow Coherence - Good range of connectives used correctly Vocabulary - Really vague. There are very few details Grammar - Good basic grammar with some complex structures Pronunciation - Clear with some intonation I recommend working on a) speed, b) vocabulary and c) ...
- Sat May 13, 2017 3:29 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please review - Task 1 letter writing
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1499
Re: Please review - Task 1 letter writing
Hello!
'reckon' is too informal.
The 'inconvenience' might only be to you, if the tutor disagrees!
All the points are covered. Vocabulary is good with some higher level items. Grammar is good, both in terms of range and accuracy.
So, overall, a good letter.
David
'reckon' is too informal.
The 'inconvenience' might only be to you, if the tutor disagrees!
All the points are covered. Vocabulary is good with some higher level items. Grammar is good, both in terms of range and accuracy.
So, overall, a good letter.
David
- Sat May 13, 2017 3:25 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my Task !
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1203
Re: Please evaluate my Task !
Hello!
No chart!
David
No chart!
David
- Sat May 13, 2017 3:24 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: REPOST: Please evaluate and rate my Essay2
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1166
Re: REPOST: Please evaluate and rate my Essay2
Hello! 'Indubitably'? Your example in the first main paragraph may or may not show a link to personality. Did he switch clothes in order to become rich? Your second example does work at schools, but what about elsewhere? Do CEOs wear the same clothes as their cleaners? Does this actually express INe...
- Thu May 11, 2017 5:02 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Dear Teachers and Seniors Urgent assessment required. Regards
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1200
Re: Dear Teachers and Seniors Urgent assessment required. Regards
Hello! Nice question! Let's see if you mention either of 2 points that immediately come to my mind! Well, the first main paragraph is not related to the specific question (though it is related to the topic in general). In addition, even if this argument were true and American families were limited t...
- Thu May 11, 2017 4:51 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual we
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7292
Re: As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individua
Hello! Overall, quite a good essay. I'd prefer the conclusion to be a little more personal, but it expresses a clear opinion. The main points are valid and are developed to some extent. However, sometimes, the development is unclear, e.g. Indian companies have the best benefits - how are they better...
- Thu May 11, 2017 4:40 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2 please evalute
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1245
Re: task 2 please evalute
Hello! Not bad. You do raise good points, but you tend to make 'jumps' in thinking/logic, e.g. you do not explain why school trips WILL (= for sure) make children more interested in science. When you say that the USA is the most developed country in the world, what do you mean exactly? (Again, this ...
- Wed May 10, 2017 5:27 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: writing task 2:What are the advantages and disadvantages of using robots in our life?
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2388
Re: writing task 2:What are the advantages and disadvantages of using robots in our life?
Hello! Content: Well, my first question is where do you live? Which hotels and restaurants are commonly using robots? Robots may not 'rest' but they do require maintenance. Do robots do things perfectly? Human productivity and robot productivity CAN be compared. I don't understand the first sentence...
- Wed May 10, 2017 5:17 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate and rate my Letter1 (Informal)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1405
Re: Please evaluate and rate my Letter1 (Informal)
Hello! Overall, quite a good letter. The description of the file is a little vague, but all points have been covered. You do attempt some complex structures, but there are quite a lot of mistakes in the letter. However, there are some issues with vocabulary, especially ... express post, not speed ma...
- Wed May 10, 2017 5:09 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please assess this essay_ really need you feedbacks aim band 7
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1327
Re: Please assess this essay_ really need you feedbacks aim band 7
Hello! That's quite a long introduction. First main paragraph - It's a matter of opinion, so it wouldn't really affect your score, but isn't one of the biggest problems in modern cities traffic jams? Either way, you do need to explain how a 'cutting edge' transport system improves the quality of lif...
- Tue May 09, 2017 4:12 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Kindly evalute task2
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1387
Re: Kindly evalute task2
Hello! Basically, a good essay. I think that the points could be a little more developed, but you have included some supporting sentences. Grammatical range is a little limited and there are some mistakes, though these do not generally affect meaning. Vocabulary is good, with a few higher level item...
- Tue May 09, 2017 3:54 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2: Some people think that school should involve students in deciding on how to run school? Do you agree?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 13045
Re: Task 2: Some people think that school should involve students in deciding on how to run school? Do you agree?
Hello! Basically, a good essay. I notice that you use 'will' a lot. How do you know for sure that these results WILL happen? I think that you have failed to prove that these results will be for the majority of students. This is reflected in the limited range of grammatical structures - no conditiona...
- Tue May 09, 2017 3:40 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 (GT) Please mark my Essay.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1922
Re: Task 2 (GT) Please mark my Essay.
Hello! First sentence - Wrong! Only about a third to a half of smokers die from smoking related illnesses. First main paragraph - Every time you breathe out, you breathe out carbon - so hold your breath! The suggestion that smokers create 30% of the toxic gases is a joke. That would put them on a si...
- Tue May 09, 2017 3:27 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please asses my writing task 2
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1454
Re: Please asses my writing task 2
Hello! The second main paragraph is much longer than the first. Sometimes, the way you express your points is unclear. "These contents could be harmful ..." (main paragraph 2) So, do you mean that ANYTHING that could be harmful must be banned from the internet? Because that pretty much cov...
- Tue May 09, 2017 3:16 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please evaluate my essay
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1610
Re: please evaluate my essay
Hello! Three things need to be changed: 1. First main paragraph, third sentence. 2. The first main paragraph is far longer than the second. 3. The conclusion has no personal opinion. However, overall, there is good vocabulary, though the range of grammatical structures is limited. There are some mis...
- Tue May 09, 2017 2:56 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: an academic IELTS task 1. would very appreciate your assessment
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4074
Re: an academic IELTS task 1. would very appreciate your assessment
Hello! This is very good, but you must have some kind of summary. I suggest putting this with the introduction in the case of such diagrams. This report contains a great range of vocabulary and grammar with plenty of less common vocab items. The only changes I would make are deleting 'each has its a...
- Tue May 09, 2017 2:48 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: I will appreciate some feedback
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1386
Re: I will appreciate some feedback
Hello! Expose reasons? That means the reasons have never been used before. Change 'contaminated' to 'polluted'. Overall, I think that your points are quite basic. For example, you seem to assume that cost is the only factor when people are travelling. However, there is nothing really 'bad' in your a...
- Mon May 08, 2017 4:30 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Describe an occasion or event when you were congratulated.
- Replies: 1
- Views: 9803
Re: Describe an occasion or event when you were congratulated.
Hello! Fluency - Quite a lot of pauses. Coherence - Good use of a range of connectives Vocabulary - Some good details Grammar - Good basic grammar. Complex structures are used, but with mistakes Pronunciation - Sometimes unclear. Some intonation, however. Overall, quite good, with a need to work on ...
- Mon May 08, 2017 3:25 am
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: How to handle Agree or Disagree questions?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 7353
Re: How to handle Agree or Disagree questions?
Hello! Great question! I VERY, VERY strongly suggest that candidates (especially those aiming higher than 6) should discuss both sides of an argument. It is HIGHLY unlikely that the proposition in the statement(s) will be true for all people, so your essay should reflect this. I've seen the videos, ...