I am expecting a tremendous improvement if you rewrite this essay again in the same thread. If I write this essay again, it will not give you opportunity to practice your lack areas.
If you write the same essay again and again and I keep pointing your weaknesses, you would practice much better.
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- Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:59 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 From Uzbekistan
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1765
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:57 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 From Uzbekistan
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1765
Re: Task 2 From Uzbekistan
Most parts of the essay are out of topic.
Please read the topic many times, write down allowed areas of discussion and then again write the first paragraph.
Although the sentences need to be logically connected.
Please read the topic many times, write down allowed areas of discussion and then again write the first paragraph.
Although the sentences need to be logically connected.
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:53 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Girls and boys in separate schools!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1874
Re: Girls and boys in separate schools!
Q: Some people think that it is better to educate girls and boys in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. A: In many parts of the world ( Does this relate to topic that we are allowed...
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:48 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Girls and boys in separate schools!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1874
Re: Girls and boys in separate schools!
Farid, 1. Always plan the essay before you write. Write a high level structure on a paper before you start. This practice would help you to write equal length paragraphs and stay on topic. You will be in position to summarize the third and fourth paragraph in first one. May I suggest to see Ryan wri...
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 11:30 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my WT2.
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1972
Re: Please evaluate my WT2.
I suggest you check some videos of Ryan and practice some essays. This practice will engrave a structure in your mind.
Secondly, as you write, rewrite the essay topic and your previously written context again and again. This would help you to be on track.
Also plan well before you start writing.
Secondly, as you write, rewrite the essay topic and your previously written context again and again. This would help you to be on track.
Also plan well before you start writing.
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 11:28 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my WT2.
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1972
Re: Please evaluate my WT2.
Due to development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree? ************************************************...
- Tue Mar 14, 2017 12:17 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my WT2.
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1972
Re: Please evaluate my WT2.
The essay topic is not addressed
- Tue Mar 14, 2017 12:16 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please Asses My Task 1 General Training. Thank You
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1971
Re: Please Asses My Task 1 General Training. Thank You
The second paragraph is bit out of topic.
You made an assumption that all listeners are authors?
You made an assumption that all listeners are authors?
- Tue Mar 14, 2017 12:13 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my Task 2 essay. Thank you!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1466
Re: Please evaluate my Task 2 essay. Thank you!
The essay is out of the topic, particularly the second paragraph.
Please recheck. If you kindly rewrite it again, it will be much improved and I will be in position to assess your skills in more details.
Please recheck. If you kindly rewrite it again, it will be much improved and I will be in position to assess your skills in more details.
- Mon Mar 13, 2017 7:05 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: KINDLY , Evaluate my essay :) -- Thank you a Million for All your precious feedback :)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1396
Re: KINDLY , Evaluate my essay :) -- Thank you a Million for All your precious feedback :)
I think you need to follow a structure and plan it well before you start
- Mon Mar 13, 2017 7:03 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2. The subway (attempt 3). Please evaluate
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1820
Re: Task 2. The subway (attempt 3). Please evaluate
I would add one point for improvement
The length of second paragraph is shorter
The length of second paragraph is shorter
- Mon Mar 13, 2017 7:02 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Could you give your feedback on my essay task 2. Thanks a lot!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1867
Re: Could you give your feedback on my essay task 2. Thanks a lot!
I suggest you can bring tremendous improvements by just following up Ryan structure. Let me know if you need link of relevant videos.
- Sat Mar 04, 2017 5:38 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please Asses My Task 2 General Writing. Thank You!
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2237
Re: Please Asses My Task 2 General Writing. Thank You!
Question: Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single . Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Answe...
- Sat Mar 04, 2017 5:31 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please Evaluate my Task 2
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1572
Re: Please Evaluate my Task 2
1. There are minor issues with the structure. If you check Ryan guidelines on essays structure, you will improve a lot. For example, the conclusions paragraph should have few more lines. 2. You should not use Firstly, Secondly etc. This type of structure is used for the essays where we support one a...
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:19 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Please check my speaking task 2
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7746
Re: Please check my speaking task 2
Stay on the topic
Take a bit long pauses between sentences so that you can plan before you speak and avoid grammar mistakes.
Take a bit long pauses between sentences so that you can plan before you speak and avoid grammar mistakes.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:17 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Please review my speaking task 2.
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7147
Re: Please review my speaking task 2.
The second and third part of the topic was not addressed properly.
5.5
5.5
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:15 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Plz asses my speaking
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7080
Re: Plz asses my speaking
The recording is empty
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:14 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Plz asses my speaking
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7078
Re: Plz asses my speaking
The basic problem is getting away from the topic.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:13 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: please check my speaking
- Replies: 1
- Views: 6694
Re: please check my speaking
I inferred that the recording does not exist anymore.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:12 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Please check my speaking (Praoparn2)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7113
Re: Please check my speaking (Praoparn2)
You need to have long pauses between sentences so that you can think before you speak. This tactics would improve your speaking
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:10 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Please evaluate my speaking part 1 and 2
- Replies: 2
- Views: 7471
Re: Please evaluate my speaking part 1 and 2
You try to speak very fast which is affecting your pronunciation.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:08 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: please check my speaking
- Replies: 1
- Views: 6961
Re: please check my speaking
Nothing posted.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:07 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Crime - Please Assess This Task 2 Essay
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2619
Re: Crime - Please Assess This Task 2 Essay
As a first step of improvement, you need to follow Ryan structure of essay.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:47 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 1 Essay - Please evaluate
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1193
Re: Task 1 Essay - Please evaluate
you recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. write a letter to your friend. in your letter: ask your friend to send you on of the photographs, explain why you need that particular photograph; and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it. Dear Sarah, Hope yo...
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:43 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: General Task 1. Airport. Please evaluate
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1859
Re: General Task 1. Airport. Please evaluate
You missed the flight.
Its off the topic.
Its off the topic.