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- Fri Jul 17, 2015 5:13 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my essay.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 979
Please evaluate my essay.
Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Include your personal opinion and examples based on your own experience. In this modern era, people are readily accepting ne...
- Thu Jul 16, 2015 6:00 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Can somebody help me in evaluating my essay# New Technologies
- Replies: 0
- Views: 911
Can somebody help me in evaluating my essay# New Technologies
New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumer. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion. New technologies, in particular the Internet has changed the world we live in. Undoubtedly, these advances plays a prominent role in global trade and com...
- Wed Jul 01, 2015 5:48 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Query on General Writing task 2
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1096
Query on General Writing task 2
Hi , Query Regarding General task 2 1. Is is true that if we write more words >275 we get more marks and to get a band of 8 approx 300 words should be written? 2. If we write introduction para using few words from question , that is not counted as word count? Is this correct? 3. Is space given suffi...
- Wed Jul 01, 2015 5:21 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 Essay on hobby :- Please evaluate
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2310
Re: Task 2 Essay on hobby :- Please evaluate
Thanks Flick for your correction.
- Sun Jun 28, 2015 7:29 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Kindly critique and provide a band score
- Replies: 2
- Views: 677
Re: Kindly critique and provide a band score
Hi, 1.I find this essay very easy to follow and your points were very clear. 2., but sometimes its practicle impossible --- it is "practically" . Could you pls provide ur feedback on mine. In today's world majority of the companies face a difficult task, how to to decision making?. It is f...
- Sun Jun 28, 2015 7:18 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Tsk 2 general evaluation required
- Replies: 3
- Views: 725
Re: Tsk 2 general evaluation required
hi , 1.In conclusion : - why it is important to believe ? why u want reader to believe ? In my view it should be just " it is important. 2."Recent research" i guess it should be researches. As you are referring to be specific research 3.I think in second para to continue the flow you ...
- Sun Jun 28, 2015 7:07 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Urge to all people taking test.
- Replies: 0
- Views: 640
Urge to all people taking test.
Hi All Test Takers, We really want our work to be evaluated and that is the main reason we are posting our writings here. I could see lot of people posting but there is no feedback and suggestions. Everybody is just reading the task and providing no inputs for improvement. I did not get any feedback...
- Wed Jun 24, 2015 4:50 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 1:- Letter to friend about learning driving
- Replies: 3
- Views: 8938
Task 1:- Letter to friend about learning driving
Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.Write a letter to your friend in your letter -say why a driving letter is advantageous -recommend a driving school -give any extra guidance/tips Below is my attempt:- Dear John, I am glad to know that you are planning to lear...
- Tue Jun 23, 2015 11:55 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools - Please Evaluate
- Replies: 3
- Views: 21909
Re: physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools - Please Evaluate
Hi I like the way you have introduce the topic " lets take a deep dive on this thought, but looks like this is a short essay. Morover if you see the standard essay it is in always in 4 para's . This essay has two diff ides which can be splitted in two para. In addition to that - in my view a be...
- Tue Jun 23, 2015 11:21 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Environmental problems and solution
- Replies: 3
- Views: 21765
Re: Environmental problems and solution
HI , I am also new to essay writing. My few observation are below. 1.authority should impose --- authorities , should be pural in my view. 2.Due to poor regulator -- poor regulations 3.This can be easily evident -- this is evident. 4.deforestation which had leads to an increase -- has lead to . 5.bu...
- Tue Jun 23, 2015 10:58 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 Essay on hobby :- Please evaluate
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2310
Task 2 Essay on hobby :- Please evaluate
Question : - Few peoepl devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effects this has on the individual and the society in general. My essay :- A hobby is a way to spend spare time constructively and creatively. From historical ages, people engage themselves to learn ...
- Mon Jun 22, 2015 4:59 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Ways that Techlology affect the types of relationship people make-Please Evaluate
- Replies: 4
- Views: 867
Re: Ways that Techlology affect the types of relationship people make-Please Evaluate
Hi
WRT second arguement , how technology has made transportation quicker is not clear.
Para is telling importance of transportation , how is it related to tech?
Trasportation is not technology !!!!.
thx
WRT second arguement , how technology has made transportation quicker is not clear.
Para is telling importance of transportation , how is it related to tech?
Trasportation is not technology !!!!.
thx
- Mon Jun 22, 2015 4:50 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Marriage Age topic--- need a 6.5-8 band !!!
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6985
Re: Marriage Age topic--- need a 6.5-8 band !!!
My thoughts:- 1."It has been a hot debate " looks incorrect - It has been debated a lot. 2. Intro first sentense is too long and difficult to follow. 3. until this process will repeat himself or process repeats itself ? 4. wich spelling is incorrect. 5. "First of all, a crucial import...
- Fri Jun 19, 2015 2:39 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2181
Re: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
Hi Below is my ans. Pls evaluate. " Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction for the recently conducted " Auto CAD design course". This was a hands on experience course conducted by Master Design Institute. I regret to tell you that the arrangements done ...
- Fri Jun 19, 2015 1:40 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2181
Re: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
well in the context which u hv written i feel " strict attendance record should be taken, and people who who have enrolled in advance should only be allowed to attend the class. No last minute entry should be allowed, supervisor shd ensure etc " may sound appropriate . BTW how are when is ...
- Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:11 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2181
Re: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
Hi, In my opinion the letter does not address the question part "what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again"? . If you are allowed to sit in course for free , problem will not get solved, it is still there. Good use of vocab, but i am not sure "You see" is a co...