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by plin0627
Fri Jun 24, 2016 12:54 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: active voice and passive voice
Replies: 1
Views: 2803

active voice and passive voice

Hi guys, i'm wondering if the use of passive voice is acceptable in ielts?
by plin0627
Thu Jun 23, 2016 7:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Aiming at 7.5 above. Please help to assess as i plan to take the test in 2 weeks time. Thanks!
Replies: 2
Views: 1029

Aiming at 7.5 above. Please help to assess as i plan to take the test in 2 weeks time. Thanks!

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? In recent years, as globalisation improves trades around the world, people can now purchase the same products freely. Such devel...
by plin0627
Tue Jun 21, 2016 2:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Motorised flight was the greatest invention in 20th century. Pls assess coz i'm aiming at band 8
Replies: 1
Views: 1168

Motorised flight was the greatest invention in 20th century. Pls assess coz i'm aiming at band 8

Some people think motorised flight was the greatest invention in the 20th century and it has the biggest impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Please assess! Motorised flight has been used extensively in today’s society. But the notion of its invention was the best in twentie...
by plin0627
Sat Apr 02, 2016 5:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic: Arts. Target: band 7.5. Pls review and give feedback. Thanks much!
Replies: 2
Views: 540

Topic: Arts. Target: band 7.5. Pls review and give feedback. Thanks much!

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewere. To what extent do you agree with this view? There is a group of people asserts that funding on arts is a waste of money. Instead, the government should spend this money on areas tha...
by plin0627
Sun Mar 27, 2016 8:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic: University, require feedback pls, need band 7 at least!
Replies: 4
Views: 677

Re: Topic: University, require feedback pls, need band 7 at least!

Hi David, thanks for your feedback! can you please point out where are the errors? Revised for the conclusion below, is it ok? To conclude, i think the functions of today's university have extended in order to cope with human's needs. The university is no longer alone in sharing knowledge, but more ...
by plin0627
Sun Mar 20, 2016 6:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic: University, require feedback pls, need band 7 at least!
Replies: 4
Views: 677

Topic: University, require feedback pls, need band 7 at least!

Question: Some people think that university education should prepare students for employment while others think it should help students acquire theoretical knowledge. Discuss and give opinion. There has been a debatable topic on whether a university should be the place for higher education students ...
by plin0627
Mon Dec 14, 2015 10:49 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Library vs online information. Please assess and comments on my writing. Thanks!
Replies: 3
Views: 513

Re: Library vs online information. Please assess and comments on my writing. Thanks!

Hi David, i'm really happy that you finally say yes to my essay! i know that i didn't specific enough as when i wrote it, i felt something is missing and wrong. i will keep in mind on this and write better essay. What band score do you think i'm getting now?
Thanks for your effort in supporting us!
by plin0627
Mon Dec 14, 2015 1:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Library vs online information. Please assess and comments on my writing. Thanks!
Replies: 3
Views: 513

Library vs online information. Please assess and comments on my writing. Thanks!

As students have easy access to online information these days, libraries are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree? The availability of the Internet and its convenient accessibility to online information allow today’s students obtain information freely. Such phenomenon has led t...
by plin0627
Sun Dec 13, 2015 4:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to evaluate my writing! Thousand thanks!
Replies: 5
Views: 870

Re: Please help me to evaluate my writing! Thousand thanks!

Hi David, Now i understand it! one more question, for this type of essay - to what extend do you agree or disagree, can we write "agree" or "disagree" for the entire essay? For example, structure as below: IF AGREE on the statement, Intro: agree para 1 & 2 agree conclusion: a...
by plin0627
Mon Dec 07, 2015 9:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to evaluate my writing! Thousand thanks!
Replies: 5
Views: 870

Re: Please help me to evaluate my writing! Thousand thanks!

Hi David, many thanks for your feedback! 1. Frankly, i'm totally confused! some ielts websites suggest to state which side you choose (agree or disagree in introduction). Either agree or disagree, at first main paragraph, we can write one side(eg; agree) while second paragraph (disagree). 2. i can s...
by plin0627
Fri Dec 04, 2015 7:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to evaluate my writing! Thousand thanks!
Replies: 5
Views: 870

Re: Please help me to evaluate my writing! Thousand thanks!

I'm aiming at band 7 above. i'd sat for ielts test few times but scored only band 6 in writing! but i spoke to one ielts examiner before and she said that i could possibly get band 7 as she checked my essay before. Even so, i still got only band 6 during my last attempt. Please let me know what's my...
by plin0627
Thu Dec 03, 2015 7:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to evaluate my writing! Thousand thanks!
Replies: 5
Views: 870

Please help me to evaluate my writing! Thousand thanks!

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good b...
by plin0627
Sat Aug 09, 2014 6:42 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: require speaking partner in targetting band 7.5 above!
Replies: 1
Views: 529

require speaking partner in targetting band 7.5 above!

hi guys,
please add me at soey27 for speaking partner. i know the strategies but couldnt practise more without any partner! u are welcome to join me especially female!
by plin0627
Sat Aug 09, 2014 6:32 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Speaking and writing partner band 8
Replies: 6
Views: 1364

Re: Speaking and writing partner band 8

hi mates,

please add me too. i aim to score at least 7.5 in speaking! my skpye id: soey27
by plin0627
Sat Apr 19, 2014 9:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls evaluating my essay!Task 2: causes/effects of overweight
Replies: 1
Views: 790

pls evaluating my essay!Task 2: causes/effects of overweight

The livelihoods and lifestyles of people have change rapidly along with the modernization world. Of all the changes, it is obvious that people are gaining weights compared with previous centuries. To address this issue, encouraging people understanding is a paramount first step. This essay will exa...