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by asadurk
Wed May 27, 2015 5:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can this essay get a band 7 or more
Replies: 2
Views: 3430

Re: Can this essay get a band 7 or more

Thanks flick for your review. I will try to avoid these mistakes next time.
by asadurk
Thu May 21, 2015 7:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can this essay get a band 7 or more
Replies: 2
Views: 3430

Can this essay get a band 7 or more

Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view? The methods of marketing the products have evolved with the passage of the time. Now, in the global world, several advance methods are used in advertising. However,...
by asadurk
Wed May 20, 2015 6:49 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can this essay get a band 7 or more
Replies: 1
Views: 393

Can this essay get a band 7 or more

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Since the beginning of recorded time, talent is essential for the in...
by asadurk
Tue May 19, 2015 6:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 7 band)
Replies: 4
Views: 694

Re: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 7 band)

Thanks flick for your valuable comments. I have written this essay again. Can you check it out and tell me what band can I get ??? Challenges in the under-graduation are related to practical field. Consequently, some people believe that getting experience, related to field, by traveling, aid student...
by asadurk
Mon May 18, 2015 6:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 7 band)
Replies: 5
Views: 1058

Re: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 7 band)

Thanks Fliker, I have rewrite it again. Can you also check it out and give your valuable comments. Can you also tell me what band I'll take with this essay. The availability of Remote jobs is one of the innovations of the internet. It aids companies and employees to do work, even when they are not p...
by asadurk
Thu May 14, 2015 7:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing. 5th Essay
Replies: 6
Views: 1358

Re: Please evaluate my writing. 5th Essay

Dr Mathew, please give me your valuable comments on this essay. Can I get 7 band with this essay ??? Film industry is one of the beneficiaries of the modern technology. Significant importance has been taken by it due to its mass production, which entertain millions of viewers. Its notable importance...
by asadurk
Mon May 11, 2015 7:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 7 band)
Replies: 4
Views: 694

Please evaluate my essay (targeting 7 band)

Students who go directly from school to university benefit less from and contribute less to their courses than those who take a job or travel in order to get more experience in 'real world' before they start higher education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons...
by asadurk
Fri May 08, 2015 6:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS writing task2 need a proofreading please
Replies: 7
Views: 2622

Re: IELTS writing task2 need a proofreading please

Thanks Dr. Matthew for your detailed response against my essay. I will try my best in my next essay and will submit here for proofreading. Hope your best guidance will aid me to get overall 7 or more bands. I'm having also trouble in reading and listening test, Can you also suggest me how to prepare...
by asadurk
Thu May 07, 2015 6:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS writing task2 need a proofreading please
Replies: 7
Views: 2622

Re: IELTS writing task2 need a proofreading please

Dear Dr. Matthew, I have got the basic idea of this essay by visualizing wzncx's essay. Here is my script. It's humble request to tell me what band will I get and please give me some suggestion to improve my writing skills to get 7 bands. Gridlock situation is very common during peak hours in the me...
by asadurk
Wed May 06, 2015 7:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 763

Re: Please evaluate my essay task 2

Thanks for evaluating and telling me about my mistakes. Can I get overall 6 in this essay?
by asadurk
Wed May 06, 2015 3:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing task 2 (targeting 6.5 band)
Replies: 1
Views: 335

Please evaluate my writing task 2 (targeting 6.5 band)

Topic: It is said that day-by-day people’s lives are becoming increasingly stressful. What are the reasons behind that? What can be done to solve this problem? Stress is one of the key factors that reduce human efficiency in the work. In the modern world, there are many potential reasons in which, o...
by asadurk
Mon May 04, 2015 5:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 763

Please evaluate my essay task 2

Topic: The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Write an essay looking at the advantages and disadvantages of this professional arrangement. Essay One of the miracle of the 20th century was internet, which has become more useful to the end user from the start of ...
by asadurk
Sun May 03, 2015 8:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 7 band)
Replies: 5
Views: 1058

Re: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 7 band)

It's improved version of above essay. Please do not consider above essay Topic: The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Write an essay looking at the advantages and disadvantages of this professional arrangement. Essay One of the miracle of the 20th century is i...
by asadurk
Sun May 03, 2015 7:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 7 band)
Replies: 5
Views: 1058

Please evaluate my essay (targeting 7 band)

The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Write an essay looking at the advantages and disadvantages of this professional arrangement. One of the miracle of the 20th century is internet, which became more powerful and useful to the end user from the start of the ...
by asadurk
Thu Mar 19, 2015 12:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Talent can only be inherited or talent can be learned ?
Replies: 0
Views: 343

Talent can only be inherited or talent can be learned ?

Topic : It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Essay: We all know about the people who are particularly famo...
by asadurk
Wed Mar 18, 2015 3:37 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: seeking speaking partner
Replies: 4
Views: 2026

Re: seeking speaking partner

My skype id is asad.edu@outlook.com. You can add me if you are still seeking speaking partner.
by asadurk
Tue Mar 17, 2015 8:44 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: need help on reading and speaking section
Replies: 1
Views: 1039

need help on reading and speaking section

Hello every one,

I would like to give IELTS examination ASAP. To do this, I need to help all of you guys but now I need to find someone who would also like to improve his/her speaking skills and further more If any one can tell me where to improve my reading skills.


Thanks alot
Asad