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Hello! I don't understand the fourth sentence of the first main paragraph, though I think I know what you want to say. Overall, this is a very good essay. I'd prefer a more personal conclusion, but your opinion is clear. The points are all valid and most are well-developed and clear. The variety of ...

Hello Mandeep! I'm not familiar with the situation in India. Is it possible to go to a foreign doctor to get a certificate? Perhaps you could check with the BC/IDP to see what they say. I don't actually know what happens to the speaking scores for candidates with stammers. We have procedures for exa...

Hello! (Please post in the writing section next time.) Make your summary clearer and use it to look at the overall trend rather than just one or two pieces of information. Your description of the detail is good in terms of describing the line, but not so good in terms of grammar. Vocabulary is a lit...

Hello! Fluency - Good speed. Pauses are generally appropriate. Coherence - Very good use of a range of connectives. Vocabulary - Very good! Perfect use of 'bs'. Great examples in your answers. I love the way you divide up the answers, e.g. cities/countryside with regard to internet access (It's shoc...

Hello! Introduction is nearly as long as the main paragraphs! I'm not very convinced by the main points. Companies that use trees usually DO plant more - it's how they make money! I'm pretty sure Coca-Cola does not recycle all its plastic. (Which country?) Paying taxes is something companies are req...

Hello! This is quite a good essay. Your points are clear and each has some development. However, I do note - yet again!!! - that the introduction is longer than the main paragraphs. The introduction and conclusion are not as good as the main paragraphs. you fail to explain how parks are an integral ...

Hello! Fluency - Speech is quite slow Coherence - Good range of connectives used correctly Vocabulary - Really vague. There are very few details Grammar - Good basic grammar with some complex structures Pronunciation - Clear with some intonation I recommend working on a) speed, b) vocabulary and c) ...

Hello!

'reckon' is too informal.

The 'inconvenience' might only be to you, if the tutor disagrees!

All the points are covered. Vocabulary is good with some higher level items. Grammar is good, both in terms of range and accuracy.

So, overall, a good letter.

David

Hello!

No chart!

David

Hello! 'Indubitably'? Your example in the first main paragraph may or may not show a link to personality. Did he switch clothes in order to become rich? Your second example does work at schools, but what about elsewhere? Do CEOs wear the same clothes as their cleaners? Does this actually express INe...

Hello! Nice question! Let's see if you mention either of 2 points that immediately come to my mind! Well, the first main paragraph is not related to the specific question (though it is related to the topic in general). In addition, even if this argument were true and American families were limited t...

Hello! Overall, quite a good essay. I'd prefer the conclusion to be a little more personal, but it expresses a clear opinion. The main points are valid and are developed to some extent. However, sometimes, the development is unclear, e.g. Indian companies have the best benefits - how are they better...

Hello! Not bad. You do raise good points, but you tend to make 'jumps' in thinking/logic, e.g. you do not explain why school trips WILL (= for sure) make children more interested in science. When you say that the USA is the most developed country in the world, what do you mean exactly? (Again, this ...

Hello! Content: Well, my first question is where do you live? Which hotels and restaurants are commonly using robots? Robots may not 'rest' but they do require maintenance. Do robots do things perfectly? Human productivity and robot productivity CAN be compared. I don't understand the first sentence...

Hello! Overall, quite a good letter. The description of the file is a little vague, but all points have been covered. You do attempt some complex structures, but there are quite a lot of mistakes in the letter. However, there are some issues with vocabulary, especially ... express post, not speed ma...

Hello! That's quite a long introduction. First main paragraph - It's a matter of opinion, so it wouldn't really affect your score, but isn't one of the biggest problems in modern cities traffic jams? Either way, you do need to explain how a 'cutting edge' transport system improves the quality of lif...

Hello! Basically, a good essay. I think that the points could be a little more developed, but you have included some supporting sentences. Grammatical range is a little limited and there are some mistakes, though these do not generally affect meaning. Vocabulary is good, with a few higher level item...

Hello! Basically, a good essay. I notice that you use 'will' a lot. How do you know for sure that these results WILL happen? I think that you have failed to prove that these results will be for the majority of students. This is reflected in the limited range of grammatical structures - no conditiona...

Hello! First sentence - Wrong! Only about a third to a half of smokers die from smoking related illnesses. First main paragraph - Every time you breathe out, you breathe out carbon - so hold your breath! The suggestion that smokers create 30% of the toxic gases is a joke. That would put them on a si...

Hello! The second main paragraph is much longer than the first. Sometimes, the way you express your points is unclear. "These contents could be harmful ..." (main paragraph 2) So, do you mean that ANYTHING that could be harmful must be banned from the internet? Because that pretty much cov...

Hello! Three things need to be changed: 1. First main paragraph, third sentence. 2. The first main paragraph is far longer than the second. 3. The conclusion has no personal opinion. However, overall, there is good vocabulary, though the range of grammatical structures is limited. There are some mis...

Hello! This is very good, but you must have some kind of summary. I suggest putting this with the introduction in the case of such diagrams. This report contains a great range of vocabulary and grammar with plenty of less common vocab items. The only changes I would make are deleting 'each has its a...

Hello! Expose reasons? That means the reasons have never been used before. Change 'contaminated' to 'polluted'. Overall, I think that your points are quite basic. For example, you seem to assume that cost is the only factor when people are travelling. However, there is nothing really 'bad' in your a...

Hello! Fluency - Quite a lot of pauses. Coherence - Good use of a range of connectives Vocabulary - Some good details Grammar - Good basic grammar. Complex structures are used, but with mistakes Pronunciation - Sometimes unclear. Some intonation, however. Overall, quite good, with a need to work on ...

Hello! Great question! I VERY, VERY strongly suggest that candidates (especially those aiming higher than 6) should discuss both sides of an argument. It is HIGHLY unlikely that the proposition in the statement(s) will be true for all people, so your essay should reflect this. I've seen the videos, ...