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by Shokir
Mon Oct 10, 2016 1:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Isn't it quite complicated T1 sample?
Replies: 2
Views: 590

Re: Isn't it quite complicated T1 sample?

Hello! Ah, I think you have taken the complicated route with this task. The easy way to do it is to describe the bar chart and the line chart separately, then add a summary with the main points from the two combined. It is possible to do it the way you have, but the reader will be constantly jumpin...
by Shokir
Sun Oct 09, 2016 3:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WRITING TASK 2
Replies: 4
Views: 863

Re: WRITING TASK 2

Aky wrote:Hi Shokir Where are you From ?
Your writing is better than previous ones !
I wanna keep in touch with you !!!
Hi Aky! I am very glad to hear it. I am from Uzbekistan. Do you have telegram? If you do, PM me your number and i will add you my contacts
by Shokir
Sat Oct 08, 2016 6:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WRITING TASK 2
Replies: 4
Views: 863

WRITING TASK 2

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? O...
by Shokir
Thu Oct 06, 2016 10:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Isn't it quite complicated T1 sample?
Replies: 2
Views: 590

Isn't it quite complicated T1 sample?

The provided graphs represent data on how much money spent for fast food per weekly in Britain and how was the consumption of them between 1970 and 1990. What is noticeable here is that hamburgers were quite chic among British people. Starting with fish and chips, for which both people with high inc...
by Shokir
Fri Sep 30, 2016 12:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Not the best sample of T2. Need to know my weakness to make it the best one.
Replies: 2
Views: 626

Not the best sample of T2. Need to know my weakness to make it the best one.

The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of web? What solutions can you suggest? I would not be mistaken, if I said that the internet is the most popular term throughout the world. However, this term is also associa...
by Shokir
Fri Sep 30, 2016 9:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: How about this kind T1?
Replies: 4
Views: 761

Re: How about this kind T1?

Hello! Generally a good report. You have included the required information. There are some mistakes. For example, the second sentences can be removed/changed. It is not really relevant as a key point. Grammar and vocabulary are both good and any mistakes do not interfere with meaning. All the best,...
by Shokir
Thu Sep 29, 2016 10:29 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Listening and reading academic mode.
Replies: 1
Views: 5140

Listening and reading academic mode.

There is a common instruction like 'Write no more than 3 words' in both listening and writing sections. What if two of my words are correct and one is incorrect? How examiners will consider this one? For example, my answer: 'student house' but the right one was 'student hostle' or another one, my an...
by Shokir
Thu Sep 29, 2016 10:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: How about this kind T1?
Replies: 4
Views: 761

How about this kind T1?

The given diagram gives data on the removal of salts and impurities from sea water to make it drinkable. What stands out from the graph is that the main stage of the process is explained more in detail. Firstly, saltwater from the sea is flowed to the initial stage called pretreatment filter. In thi...
by Shokir
Tue Sep 27, 2016 2:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: T2 academic
Replies: 1
Views: 512

T2 academic

There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Questions: Should these kind essays be written by discussing both sides of the argument and then tell...
by Shokir
Tue Sep 27, 2016 2:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Thank you for sacrificing your valuable time for commenting on my T1
Replies: 1
Views: 477

Thank you for sacrificing your valuable time for commenting on my T1

The provided graphs demonstrate data about aftermath of adult education exploration. The bar chart describes main reasons of adults’ decision to study. Meanwhile, the pie chart tells us how respondents think the costs of adult education should be shared. What stands out from the graph are that two-f...
by Shokir
Mon Sep 26, 2016 6:38 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: How to expand vocabulary?
Replies: 1
Views: 5351

How to expand vocabulary?

Hello examiners! During practicing ielts i always struggle with shortage of appropriate words. My written samples doesn't flow as fluent as in my mind. Moreover, remembering new words is a hurdle that never seems to surrender. On top of all of that, what strategies or books that can augment my lexic...
by Shokir
Fri Sep 23, 2016 10:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Another T2 sample. Thank you beforehand for any corrections. And have got several questions inside.
Replies: 1
Views: 525

Re: Another T2 sample. Thank you beforehand for any corrections. And have got several questions inside.

Dear examinars! I misunderstood following question:"Why do you think it is important to do so?" is it about importance of studying or not studying the history?One more question. To which type of T2 essays would you relate this task? Opinion>personal viewpoint or Ideas>cause/effect essays o...
by Shokir
Fri Sep 23, 2016 10:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Another T2 sample. Thank you beforehand for any corrections. And have got several questions inside.
Replies: 1
Views: 525

Another T2 sample. Thank you beforehand for any corrections. And have got several questions inside.

To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history? There is no doubt that majority of today’s respondents consider studying past as it has already outlived its usefulness in the...
by Shokir
Fri Sep 23, 2016 4:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: One more T1 that needs your review
Replies: 2
Views: 538

One more T1 that needs your review

The bar chart illustrates data about how 3 sectors like agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial contributed to the UK economy in the 20th century. It can be seen from the graph that, the highest portion ever was made by the sector of agriculture. Contribution of the agriculture was 50...
by Shokir
Thu Sep 15, 2016 1:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I will be quite thankful for any comments regarding my T2 corrections.
Replies: 2
Views: 815

Re: I will be quite thankful for any comments regarding my T2 corrections.

Thank you for your response. Can i ask you to be more specific about underlined words. I cannot clearly see what's wrong with them
by Shokir
Tue Sep 06, 2016 6:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I will be quite thankful for any comments regarding my T2 corrections.
Replies: 2
Views: 815

I will be quite thankful for any comments regarding my T2 corrections.

People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? Humankind subconsciously refuses most alternatives of the things which he or she get used to do in her or his everyday life. Majority of today’s respondents would not choose a...
by Shokir
Thu Aug 25, 2016 10:15 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Need your corrections and notes for T1! Thank you in advance for them.
Replies: 2
Views: 1043

Need your corrections and notes for T1! Thank you in advance for them.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of the access to informational technologies in the UK’s homes between the years of 1996 and 2003. It can be seen from the graph that homes of the UK had no access to the internet at the beginning of the period. Initially only about 30% of homes of the UK wer...