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- Mon Jul 02, 2018 7:56 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my task one`
- Replies: 2
- Views: 7712
Please evaluate my task one`
You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter: • apologize for the mistake • find out how important the book is to him/her • say what you will ...
- Mon Jul 02, 2018 7:48 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate - IELTS General - Task 2 Essay
- Replies: 3
- Views: 10028
Re: Please evaluate - IELTS General - Task 2 Essay
Sorry, I have little knowledge to rates your essay. I have written my essay on same topic. You may wants to compare it. I humbly request readers to identify mistakes in my essay too. Artificial intelligence powered robots are replacing skilled workers at a surprising rate. Many of clericals and offi...
- Mon Aug 21, 2017 3:31 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Task 2
- Replies: 5
- Views: 8657
Re: Task 2
You should write both and then conclude.
- Mon Aug 21, 2017 3:30 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Please review my essay and provide feeback
- Replies: 1
- Views: 6528
Re: Please review my essay and provide feeback
I think your both paragraphs are under developed.
- Mon Aug 21, 2017 3:25 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Study group for -nov19 IELTS
- Replies: 17
- Views: 18440
Re: Study group for -nov19 IELTS
we should have a Whatsapp group.
- Mon Aug 21, 2017 3:24 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Improve IELTS score
- Replies: 24
- Views: 40561
Re: Improve IELTS score
You improve your score when you focus so much that you see yourself solving paper in dreams
- Mon Aug 21, 2017 3:21 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Kindly assess my writing essay 2
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1990
Re: Kindly assess my writing essay 2
QUE - Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Ans - In today's world( these days), certain members of the society categorize people according to their dressing sense( choices). In addition, they...
- Mon Aug 21, 2017 3:15 pm
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: money and happiness...my first speaking part 3
- Replies: 3
- Views: 9932
Re: money and happiness...my first speaking part 3
The Ry them is causing issues in your speaking. If you speak few words, then pause and collect your thoughts, color your language, you will improve significantly.
- Mon Aug 21, 2017 3:14 pm
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Feedback needed for my speaking. Thanks, friends.
- Replies: 10
- Views: 15614
Re: Feedback needed for my speaking. Thanks, friends.
I recommend if you break small sentences and take pauses, it will help a lot.
- Sat Apr 08, 2017 9:25 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Feedback required on writing task 2 - essay
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3755
Re: Feedback required on writing task 2 - essay
The essay need to follow a proper structure of Ryan. Please check his videos on Youtube.
- Sat Apr 08, 2017 8:15 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 (Driving)
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3669
- Sat Apr 08, 2017 8:13 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to
- Replies: 2
- Views: 28252
Re: It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessar
The English and grammar are quite good. However, you need to be on topic. I would suggest you to check Ryan writing book and practice few essays with him. If you can not access this book, then write the main topic many times and brainstorm and plan your essay. Plan each and every paragraph of your e...
- Sat Apr 08, 2017 8:04 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: kindly assess my task 2 thanks.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1872
Re: kindly assess my task 2 thanks.
May I points to aligning the essay much better with the topic?
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 2:14 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1696
Re: Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!
Question: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home. Answer: These days, working from remote locations become very frequent in modern world. These days trend of working from remote locations is getting attraction. Technologies become more and more reliable and faster, so compani...
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 2:04 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: My task 2 essay.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1980
Re: My task 2 essay.
Structure is key in essay writing that can be improved only by planning well in advance.
Can you please re write this essay. Both paragraphs should have same length. Both should be summarized in first paragraph.
Can you please re write this essay. Both paragraphs should have same length. Both should be summarized in first paragraph.
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:59 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 From Uzbekistan
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1796
Re: Task 2 From Uzbekistan
I am expecting a tremendous improvement if you rewrite this essay again in the same thread. If I write this essay again, it will not give you opportunity to practice your lack areas.
If you write the same essay again and again and I keep pointing your weaknesses, you would practice much better.
If you write the same essay again and again and I keep pointing your weaknesses, you would practice much better.
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:57 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 From Uzbekistan
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1796
Re: Task 2 From Uzbekistan
Most parts of the essay are out of topic.
Please read the topic many times, write down allowed areas of discussion and then again write the first paragraph.
Although the sentences need to be logically connected.
Please read the topic many times, write down allowed areas of discussion and then again write the first paragraph.
Although the sentences need to be logically connected.
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:53 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Girls and boys in separate schools!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1900
Re: Girls and boys in separate schools!
Q: Some people think that it is better to educate girls and boys in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. A: In many parts of the world ( Does this relate to topic that we are allowed...
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:48 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Girls and boys in separate schools!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1900
Re: Girls and boys in separate schools!
Farid, 1. Always plan the essay before you write. Write a high level structure on a paper before you start. This practice would help you to write equal length paragraphs and stay on topic. You will be in position to summarize the third and fourth paragraph in first one. May I suggest to see Ryan wri...
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 11:30 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my WT2.
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1996
Re: Please evaluate my WT2.
I suggest you check some videos of Ryan and practice some essays. This practice will engrave a structure in your mind.
Secondly, as you write, rewrite the essay topic and your previously written context again and again. This would help you to be on track.
Also plan well before you start writing.
Secondly, as you write, rewrite the essay topic and your previously written context again and again. This would help you to be on track.
Also plan well before you start writing.
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 11:28 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my WT2.
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1996
Re: Please evaluate my WT2.
Due to development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree? ************************************************...
- Tue Mar 14, 2017 12:17 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my WT2.
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1996
Re: Please evaluate my WT2.
The essay topic is not addressed
- Tue Mar 14, 2017 12:16 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please Asses My Task 1 General Training. Thank You
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1993
Re: Please Asses My Task 1 General Training. Thank You
The second paragraph is bit out of topic.
You made an assumption that all listeners are authors?
You made an assumption that all listeners are authors?
- Tue Mar 14, 2017 12:13 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my Task 2 essay. Thank you!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1492
Re: Please evaluate my Task 2 essay. Thank you!
The essay is out of the topic, particularly the second paragraph.
Please recheck. If you kindly rewrite it again, it will be much improved and I will be in position to assess your skills in more details.
Please recheck. If you kindly rewrite it again, it will be much improved and I will be in position to assess your skills in more details.
- Mon Mar 13, 2017 7:05 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: KINDLY , Evaluate my essay :) -- Thank you a Million for All your precious feedback :)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1407
Re: KINDLY , Evaluate my essay :) -- Thank you a Million for All your precious feedback :)
I think you need to follow a structure and plan it well before you start