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- Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:11 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
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Re: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
Hi, In my opinion the letter does not address the question part "what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again"? . If you are allowed to sit in course for free , problem will not get solved, it is still there. Good use of vocab, but i am not sure "You see" is a co...