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by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 5:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls kindly grade my essay- Supermarket Vs local shop
Replies: 1
Views: 1822

Re: pls kindly grade my essay- Supermarket Vs local shop

People prefer to go shopping in the supermarket rather than small shops and local markets. Why has this happened? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? In the fast-pace of modern life, urban citizens like to buy daily items in big supermarket chains rather than shopping in small st...
by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 4:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Need Band Score for this essay and areas of improvement
Replies: 2
Views: 854

Re: Need Band Score for this essay and areas of improvement

Would appreciate if you could provide a band score to the essay below and also point out what can be improved in terms of 1. Task Achievement 2. Lexical resource 3. Cohesion and Coherence 4. Grammar Doctors advise against fast food, but still people eat it . Why do people eat fast food? W hat can b...
by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 4:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please let me know that how much i can score in LELTS task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 2058

Re: please let me know that how much i can score in LELTS ta

Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. In today’s era most foods that are purchased in small stores and supermarkets have chemi...
by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 3:47 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.
Replies: 12
Views: 2913

Re: IELTS Essay - Please check this and rate it.

An increasing number of people changed their career and place of residence several times in their life. Do you think it is a positive or negative development ? Change is a fact of life. And more often than not, it is instigated by negativity. Change is usually a response to some form of negativity ...
by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 3:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: can any one check it?
Replies: 3
Views: 808

Re: can any one check it?

I think this essay deserves a 7. It is well written and easy to understand. English is such a difficult language to learn and you are doing a great job. Don't give up!
by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 3:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: which band do u rate my essay?
Replies: 2
Views: 727

Re: which band do u rate my essay?

Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Many people believe that a person is not able to secure a good job in the future without a u...
by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 3:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 2-resist making changes
Replies: 7
Views: 2614

Re: pls give me a band score for Task 2-resist making change

People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? With such a fast pace of life, human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. However, s ome people refuse to make any alteration in their lives. It is argued that t...
by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 2:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: correct it please
Replies: 3
Views: 818

Re: correct it please

I would give this essay a 5 - I understand your meaning but there are some mistakes.
Keep up the good work!
by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 1:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Many countries nowadays have been seeking to transform agric
Replies: 1
Views: 1203

Re: Many countries nowadays have been seeking to transform a

In recent times, a lot of nations have been changing agricultural lands to industrial zones. While many views imply that this trend is necessary, others believe that unchanged structure would be better and I am convinced that the second view make s sense for the reasons outlined in this essay. (<--...
by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 1:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic of financial courses
Replies: 4
Views: 934

Re: Topic of financial courses

Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is true that there are few opportunities for children to improve their financial capacity at school. However, I would oppose the view that financial education s...
by Flick
Fri Apr 25, 2014 1:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic: Machine Translation - Academic Task 2
Replies: 7
Views: 5638

Re: Topic: Machine Translation - Academic Task 2

Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. Do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words. The demand in language translation has recently increased due to the evo...
by Flick
Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: difference b/w Educate and Literate person
Replies: 2
Views: 2070

Re: difference b/w Educate and Literate person

Q: How people define the real difference between Educate and Literate person. State your opinion about our education structure relevant to their Discussion? Educated and Literate . B oth terms are used for people who have the ability to read and write. But the difference lies in the fact that someo...
by Flick
Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: can any one check it?
Replies: 3
Views: 808

Re: can any one check it?

People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? It is true that some people are reluctant to make changes in their lives. This could bring trouble to these people, especially in this ever changing, dynamic world. Modern so...
by Flick
Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: correct it please
Replies: 3
Views: 818

Re: correct it please

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encour a ged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults." ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nowadays ...
by Flick
Thu Apr 24, 2014 4:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2-Making changes in life. Please, correct it
Replies: 7
Views: 1475

Re: Task 2-Making changes in life. Please, correct it

I would expect you to get around the 6 band. You had good reasoning and just need a little bit more practice on getting it to flow.
by Flick
Mon Apr 21, 2014 11:02 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2-Making changes in life. Please, correct it
Replies: 7
Views: 1475

Re: Task 2-Making changes in life. Please, correct it

People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? It is hard for individuals to alter their living standards, customary activities and regular attitudes. (<-- consider including a possible reason for this.) In fact, avoiding...