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by yash567blr
Tue Nov 12, 2013 1:53 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: need reviews and toughts about my essay (letter +essay)
Replies: 2
Views: 2305

Re: need reviews and toughts about my essay (letter +essay)

Thanks Ryan for your valuable inputs :)
by yash567blr
Tue Nov 12, 2013 1:43 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: kindly give me the rating for this essay ielts task2 generl
Replies: 3
Views: 2829

Re: kindly give me the rating for this essay ielts task2 gen

After writing my essay, felt that your concept and explanation was way different than mine. Hence sharing my version of the essay :) People say that inborn talent is very much important for the child to become successful in the respective fields like sports or music. However another set of people de...
by yash567blr
Sat Oct 26, 2013 7:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: My first writing. Could you have a look pls?
Replies: 1
Views: 1472

Re: My first writing. Could you have a look pls?

I am not an expert, i'm also learning here :) Overall content of the essay has to be improved! Talent could be a dreamed ability that everyone longs for and it seems talented people are attractive to others . Many people hold the opinion that someone was born with certain talents and others are not....
by yash567blr
Fri Oct 25, 2013 6:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: need reviews and toughts about my essay (letter +essay)
Replies: 2
Views: 2305

need reviews and toughts about my essay (letter +essay)

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. It is true that famous sports people earn alot. Their high earni...
by yash567blr
Tue Oct 22, 2013 8:28 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: latest IELTS academic writing task II - Calicut, India
Replies: 6
Views: 4658

Re: latest IELTS academic writing task II - Calicut, India

Hi Delvy,

Can you please let me know where is the video tutorial ?
by yash567blr
Tue Oct 22, 2013 6:20 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: General IELTS Writing Bangalore - 12th Oct 2013
Replies: 7
Views: 4349

Re: General IELTS Writing Bangalore - 12th Oct 2013

Hi Anilnag,

What band score can I get with this letter ?
by yash567blr
Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:02 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: what to write in this task2 academic
Replies: 6
Views: 7854

Re: what to write in this task2 academic

I am practicing with 40 mins time limit only. As I have my exams on Oct 26th! Even that essay was written in 40 mins. Trying to improve my content, grammer and vocab within 40 mins time schedule :) Initially, I was never able to write for 250 words within 40 mins, now after practice have improved an...
by yash567blr
Mon Oct 21, 2013 1:38 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: General IELTS Writing Bangalore - 12th Oct 2013
Replies: 7
Views: 4349

Re: General IELTS Writing Bangalore - 12th Oct 2013

Wanted the some expert's comments on my letter: targeting 7+ band >>>> Dear Mr.John, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have put my papers and 30th October, 2013 is my last working day. I would like to thank you for all your support and help in my difficult times. As you know, I have been...
by yash567blr
Mon Oct 21, 2013 1:03 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: what to write in this task2 academic
Replies: 6
Views: 7854

Re: what to write in this task2 academic

Hi Hiren, I dont think its mandatory to put examples for all paragraphs. I have put an example where I felt that, i can elaborate! Wrt to your essay: I have tried my best to find out whatever I cant, but still i am not an expert :) I agree with the employers who give more importance >>> more apt to ...
by yash567blr
Mon Oct 21, 2013 10:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay
Replies: 4
Views: 1602

Re: Please check my essay

Similar essay written by me. Seeing ur content now :) Yeah. I have missed to add about google,wikipedia. >> People use different ways to gather information and knowledge, some might feel that travelling is the best way to gain knowledge. Where as few others may think television and internet are the ...
by yash567blr
Mon Oct 21, 2013 9:20 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: latest IELTS academic writing task II - Calicut, India
Replies: 6
Views: 4658

Re: latest IELTS academic writing task II - Calicut, India

Essay written by me on this topic! Trying for band 7+ >>> Due to steady increase in population across globe, we are cutting down more trees to provide infrastructure to people and to build houses. Also, as the financial condition of people are improving, they are opting for private vehicles to commu...
by yash567blr
Mon Oct 21, 2013 8:34 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: what to write in this task2 academic
Replies: 6
Views: 7854

Re: what to write in this task2 academic

Hi Hiren,

I just wrote my view on this essay in another post <"Enrich the writing forum by contributing to it">.
Please check that and let me know about ur thoughts!
by yash567blr
Sun Oct 20, 2013 8:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Attention first time posters!
Replies: 70
Views: 166977

Re: Enrich the writing forum by contributing to it

I am not an expert and I am also learning and trying to reach band 7 :) Others please correct, if this essay is fine for the question. >>>>>> Though its very important to consider a person's educational qualification for hiring, candidate's personal life and values should also be taken into consider...
by yash567blr
Sun Oct 20, 2013 7:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS ESSAY
Replies: 5
Views: 3455

Re: PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS ESSAY

As a practice, I wrote the same essay from my point of views. Please let me know ur comments. >>>> In today's world, with the advancement of technology products are becoming more user friendly. I do agree with the the point that advertisements helps us in knowing new products in market and there by ...
by yash567blr
Sun Oct 20, 2013 2:57 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: speaking
Replies: 39
Views: 14756

Re: speaking

Hi Sindu,

Can u pls help me improving my writing/speaking skills ?
I need to score 7+ in all modules.
Had taken this exam once and had scored 6.5 in both writing and speaking!
my id: skype: yashwanthyadav1
gmail: yashavanth.yadav@gmail.com

Regards,
by yash567blr
Sun Oct 20, 2013 2:56 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: General IELTS Writing Bangalore - 12th Oct 2013
Replies: 7
Views: 4349

Re: General IELTS Writing Bangalore - 12th Oct 2013

Hi Anil,

Your writing is very good. Can u pls help me improving my writing/speaking skills ?
I need to score 7+ in all modules.
Had taken this exam once and had scored 6.5 in both writing and speaking!
my id: skype: yashwanthyadav1
gmail: yashavanth.yadav@gmail.com

Regards,