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by Hiren
Fri Nov 08, 2013 11:42 am
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: FINALLY,,,GOT DESIRED SCORE..@ 3RD ATTEMPT
Replies: 1
Views: 6432

FINALLY,,,GOT DESIRED SCORE..@ 3RD ATTEMPT

Hello Everybody, First of all I would like to thank Ryan for making such a wonderful blog and sharing all his knowledge and tips by youtube videos. I had to achieve overall 7 bands in IELTS with 6.5 in each section to apply for exam to register as dentist in UK. In 1st attempt, I got overall score m...
by Hiren
Wed Oct 23, 2013 10:57 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Task2 writing query
Replies: 2
Views: 1762

Task2 writing query

Hi Ryan, I am going through your IELTS videos and they are very helpful. I just want to ask you that should I use personal pronounce if essay is asked like do you agree or disagree or give your opinion? In my practice I have been writing in thesis sentence like I agree, I believe, I support viewpoin...
by Hiren
Mon Oct 21, 2013 5:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to correct my essay
Replies: 5
Views: 2695

Re: Please help me to correct my essay

How if I replace that unclear sentence with following one ? Nowadays, the knowledge of computer is essential to get an employment. I agree to the viewpoint of those people who believe that lack of computer skills have negative impact on some people's lives as the computer can enhance the speed, effi...
by Hiren
Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:32 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my task2 essay, exam on 26 oct
Replies: 2
Views: 3816

Re: Please evaluate my task2 essay, exam on 26 oct

Hi Delvy , thanks for giving your precious time for evaluating my essay. Can you please check my another essay on below link and show some mistakes? I am appearing for exam on this Saturday so would like to know mistakes and also what score you would like to give to that essay. link: http://ieltsnet...
by Hiren
Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:22 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to correct my essay
Replies: 5
Views: 2695

Re: Please help me to correct my essay

please go through my essay on same topic and show if any mistakes please. In the era of technological innovations, the use of computer is ubiquitous. When knowledge of computer is essential to get any employment, some people believe that individuals without computer skills are disadvantaged in sever...
by Hiren
Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:02 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help me to correct my essay
Replies: 5
Views: 2695

Re: Please help me to correct my essay

HI, I would advice you to write 1or 2 sentences as background in introduction paragraph. In addition, I have corrected some mistakes. Topic: Some people who can not work with computer is disadvantaged. To what extent do you agree or disagree? While there are grounds to argue that it would be disadva...
by Hiren
Mon Oct 21, 2013 2:11 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: what to write in this task2 academic
Replies: 6
Views: 7854

Re: what to write in this task2 academic

Thank you Yash for showing my mistakes.
can you tell me how long does it take for you to write such a nice essay?
Do you concentrate more on quality of essay or you try to complete essay in 40minutes?
by Hiren
Mon Oct 21, 2013 12:21 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: what to write in this task2 academic
Replies: 6
Views: 7854

Re: what to write in this task2 academic

Hi , I just went through your essay and I am quite impressed as you have used good vocabulary, connective words and complex sentences. You have covered both questions but I would like to know from you that why you chose to use example in only one supporting paragraph? And please read my essay as wel...
by Hiren
Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:12 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my task2 essay, exam on 26 oct
Replies: 2
Views: 3816

Please evaluate my task2 essay, exam on 26 oct

Some say that it is more important for employers to consider academic qualifications rather than personal life experience and values when hiring an employee. Do you agree or disagree? What are positive and negative aspects of the issue? In modern era, a confident, smart and expert employee is the b...
by Hiren
Sun Oct 20, 2013 3:35 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Attention first time posters!
Replies: 70
Views: 167190

Re: Enrich the writing forum by contributing to it

could you please help in how to format this essay? Some say that it is more important for employers to consider academic qualifications rather than personal life experience and values when hiring an employee. Do you agree or disagree? What are positive and negative aspects of the issue? From first q...
by Hiren
Sun Oct 20, 2013 3:19 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: what to write in this task2 academic
Replies: 6
Views: 7854

what to write in this task2 academic

Some say that it is more important for employers to consider academic qualifications rather than personal life experience and values when hiring an employee. Do you agree or disagree? What are positive and negative aspects of the issue? From first question, agree/disagree,it seems to be argument es...