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by argho1985
Wed Oct 29, 2014 1:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: build homes in cities or new towns?
Replies: 1
Views: 1719

Re: build homes in cities or new towns?

Because of the increase of population, more homes need to be built, is it better to build homes in existing cities or in new towns in countryside. As a result of the population explosion in recent years, where to build houses to accommodate the constantly increasing number of people is becoming an ...
by argho1985
Sun Oct 26, 2014 10:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please comment - GT TASK 1 COMPLAINT LETTER
Replies: 7
Views: 1742

Re: Please comment - GT TASK 1 COMPLAINT LETTER

You have bought a mobile phone in a tax-free shop just a few days ago, and it doesn't work properly. Write a letter to the manger to complaint about it and ask him to solve the problem. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about the mobile phone which I purchased in your duty free shop couple o...
by argho1985
Sun Oct 26, 2014 9:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Pls Comment on my essay attempt 7
Replies: 3
Views: 1370

Re: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Pls Comment on my essay attemp

Some people think that job satisfaction is important than Job security while some think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. The supply-demand driven social system we have today requires almost all of us to be ...
by argho1985
Sun Oct 26, 2014 4:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Pls Comment on my essay attempt 6
Replies: 3
Views: 1114

Re: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Pls Comment on my essay attemp

Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others however, believe individuals can also do something to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Nowadays, world is facing different environmental challenges. Due to the ultra-scale o...
by argho1985
Sat Oct 04, 2014 9:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Feedback! Please!=)
Replies: 3
Views: 2447

Re: Feedback! Please!=)

In many parts of the world there is a continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss both this views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own k...
by argho1985
Tue Jul 29, 2014 2:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi ! please comment on my essay and give me feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 1151

Re: Hi ! please comment on my essay and give me feedback

In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? In recent years, the vast expansion of information and communication technology has made globalization a p...
by argho1985
Tue Jul 29, 2014 2:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you pin-point something in this paper? Give a try!
Replies: 6
Views: 1437

Re: Could you pin-point something in this paper? Give a try!

Some people believe that punishment is the only purpose of prisons, while others believe that prisons exist for various reasons. Discuss both views and give your opinion. There are two prevailing views regarding the use of prisons. First one argues that punishment is the sole purpose of prison. How...
by argho1985
Tue Jul 29, 2014 1:44 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: IELTS remarking- Positive result
Replies: 0
Views: 769

IELTS remarking- Positive result

Hey guys, I applied for an EOR for my 7th June IELTS exam in which I got 5 in writing. My score got changed from 5 to 6 ( a big 1 band jump) and now I can apply for my Graduate Visa in order to work in Australia. I will highly recommend users to use EOR service as no one can believe that IELTS peopl...
by argho1985
Mon Jul 21, 2014 12:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my General Writing Task 2.
Replies: 6
Views: 1424

Re: Please assess my General Writing Task 2.

Hi Greg Can you assess below? Television has come a long way in last one decade with the emergence of Cable TV providing unlimited entertainment options to everyone in the family. Children and adult entertainment shows, TV shopping, news and movie channels and sports channels, you can find just any...
by argho1985
Sun Jul 20, 2014 4:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my General Writing Task
Replies: 5
Views: 2364

Re: Please assess my General Writing Task

Thanks Argho. Appreciate your feedback. On the length of essay comment, is it that we can't go beyond 150 words as long as space is there? I thought writing less than 150 was a worry. Regards Vikas Arora Hi Vikas, If you write less than 150 it will be be penalised, make sure that word limit is betw...
by argho1985
Sun Jul 20, 2014 3:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my General Writing Task
Replies: 5
Views: 2364

Re: Please assess my General Writing Task

You have taken a cruise and have been disappointed with the experience. Write a letter to the cruise provider and specify - what went wrong - how did you feel about it - what do you want to be done about it. ===========================================================================================...
by argho1985
Sat Jul 19, 2014 6:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please access my band in General Writing Task2
Replies: 3
Views: 1340

Re: Please access my band in General Writing Task2

Topic: International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. My Answer: In this world of globalisation, International marketing i...
by argho1985
Thu Jul 17, 2014 1:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic writing Task 2 review
Replies: 4
Views: 2277

Re: Academic writing Task 2 review

Hello All, I am a newbie to the forum and I have my IELTS in a month. My first attempt to the writing task 2 here. I would appreciate your comments. A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and tr...
by argho1985
Thu Jul 17, 2014 4:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi, everyone, i am new here. Can any one score my task 2 ?
Replies: 3
Views: 1552

Re: Hi, everyone, i am new here. Can any one score my task 2

Memorization of information by frequent repetition (rote learning) plays a role in most education systems. Do the advantages of this method of learning outweigh its disadvantages? How to study better remains questionable to many people. It is quite common these days for students to learn by role, w...
by argho1985
Thu Jul 17, 2014 3:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my general training writing task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 1159

Re: Please assess my general training writing task 2

Many people like to wear fashionable clothes Why do you think this is the case? Is this good thing or bad thing? Lots of individual nowadays, are keen on going with the flow, most especially in the new trend of stylish design in apparel clothing. This has been obvious with the people living in the ...
by argho1985
Tue Jul 15, 2014 1:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Rate My General Task 2 Essay : 1
Replies: 1
Views: 657

Re: Please Rate My General Task 2 Essay : 1

Work : Same job for life With the Industrial revolution, the world has undergone rapid development throughout the past decade. As a result of this, world has become urbanized, modernized and globalized. Simple household stuff has become more complicated and people are in a rat race to gain those ma...
by argho1985
Fri Jul 11, 2014 8:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 3022

Re: Writing Task 2

Ravian wrote:Mr. Argho,
I think people is the correct word rather than PEOPLES....

thank you
Hi,

Thanks for that.. I forgot that people is plural..

I reckon.. you are after my english very badly..

Argho
by argho1985
Fri Jul 11, 2014 8:10 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: IELTS - Singapore 10 July 2014 General Writing
Replies: 3
Views: 2781

Re: IELTS - Singapore 10 July 2014 General Writing

Dear Friends, Below is the question for Task 1 and Task 2. The wordings are not accurate but its very close to the original. General - Task 1 You are an employee of an large company, and would like to work in another department, but you need to get training to work in that new department. Write a l...
by argho1985
Fri Jul 11, 2014 7:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 3022

Re: Writing Task 2

TEENAGERS HAVE PROBLEMS AT HOME AND SCHOOL.WHAT DIFFICULTIES ARE THEY FACING NOW?WHAT SHOULD PARENTS AND SCHOOL DO TO HELP THEM? Teenage years are the most delicate and vulnerable years of an individual's life.These are beautiful years but they have their own problems and difficulties ( not clear.....
by argho1985
Thu Jul 10, 2014 11:35 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: appearing on 10 july in india
Replies: 22
Views: 8530

Re: appearing on 10 july in india

Hi,

Can someone please post the writing task 1 and 2 questions of IELTS 10th July General Training Test which took place today in
India.

I will appearing on the 12th in Australia.

Please post ASAP.

Cheers
Argho
by argho1985
Thu Jul 10, 2014 10:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay
Replies: 10
Views: 7631

Re: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay

No, you are not right. For example, look at Ryan's example of discussion essay : http://ieltsielts.com/model-essay-sample-discussion-essay-response/ The question here states two different points of view, and you should DISCUSS both. In argument essay there is one question (like in our topic). You s...
by argho1985
Thu Jul 10, 2014 4:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: requesting letter correction
Replies: 2
Views: 659

Re: requesting letter correction

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin you...
by argho1985
Thu Jul 10, 2014 2:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay
Replies: 10
Views: 7631

Re: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay

Why do you think it is a discussion essay? As for me, it is completely argument essay. There is one question that requires our own opinion (discussion essay states usually two general opinions which are required to be discussed, and at the end of the essay we have to choose which one we prefer). Th...
by argho1985
Wed Jul 09, 2014 12:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay
Replies: 10
Views: 7631

Re: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay

Here is my version of this essay. Please, give your opinion. In most of the countries all over the world there is a noticeable tendency for high posts in companies to be occupied by men. A possible reason for this fact is sex discrimination. One of the methods to fight it is to retain some amount o...
by argho1985
Wed Jul 09, 2014 6:18 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Wirting task format
Replies: 2
Views: 706

Re: Wirting task format

Hello Everyone, I am new to IELTS, and saw many instructions on Writing task 1 and 2 for GT . However i am still confused with format of writing task 1 and 2. Can anyone please explain the format of Writing Task 1 & 2 for General Training module. Format meaning that, for instance if the WT-2 is...